It was a lovely Read HB, very touching story, sad & heart warming. I can feel the passion you put into it as i read. very nice work.
My Sweet HB Naga is looking great your work is so good Keep it up Your Number 1 Fan
the Snake girl, tail is draw better, I like how you made it curl and look longer. I also see you add new features to her armor with more detail put into it.
left one as no horns and you add a leg pouch & wrist band. she also look sharper, more serious.