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Sweet As Honey With A Cheeky Sting. BUZZ !!


« #15 : September 28, 2014, 03:13:31 AM »



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« #16 : September 28, 2014, 07:09:08 AM »


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« #17 : September 28, 2014, 10:18:56 AM »




That a girl Miss Pookie, get it all out... vent it all and don't hold back.  At least you know what the truth is... some of us can only rely on hearsay.  I have two hours to spend with you and I'm bringing a bottle of bourbon and a bottle of Captain Morgan... because



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*Be good or at least be good at what you are doing*
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« #18 : October 14, 2014, 05:46:04 AM »



                           LAUGHTER IS GOOD FOR THE SOUL
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« #19 : October 16, 2014, 03:33:25 PM »


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« #20 : October 20, 2014, 12:57:04 PM »


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« #21 : October 25, 2014, 03:41:41 PM »

Storm

It started with the rain
Then the clouds cleared
The sun appeared
It was you
The storm came once more
it didn't just rain, it poured
rays of light broke through
It was you
Nightfall came
filled sky with shame
binding what was once free
it was me
Then came the dawn
forgiving all wrongs
nothing can be undone
it was you
if only you knew
the sun needs to rise
the night needs to come to an end
with each passing day
we'll conquer the shade
and close our eyes when night falls again

T.G. Chaser
« : October 25, 2014, 04:08:34 PM Brandybee »
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« #22 : October 25, 2014, 04:11:01 PM »

That's a beautiful touching poem TG.  The girl who inspired it obviously meant something special to you.

I hope you write more.

Hugs. 


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« #23 : October 25, 2014, 04:45:05 PM »


Listen, I got to cry, cause crying, eases the pain.
Even this hurt I feel inside, words could never explain.
I just wish it would rain.



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« #24 : October 26, 2014, 04:11:05 PM »

Storm

It started with the rain
Then the clouds cleared
The sun appeared
It was you
The storm came once more
it didn't just rain, it poured
rays of light broke through
It was you
Nightfall came
filled sky with shame
binding what was once free
it was me
Then came the dawn
forgiving all wrongs
nothing can be undone
it was you
if only you knew
the sun needs to rise
the night needs to come to an end
with each passing day
we'll conquer the shade
and close our eyes when night falls again

T.G. Chaser



Congratulations T.G 
this is Beautiful
I hope  you  keep writing posting more. I would like to see more
I always know you have a special talent
time to release it   maybe its in this  best wishes..


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« #25 : October 26, 2014, 04:16:53 PM »

I agree.  TG_Chaser  that is a moving poem.  Please write more.  You have another fan joining the groupies.

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« #26 : October 26, 2014, 07:48:09 PM »

the only one who made me smile
your heart, your mind, your soul
Every day I longed for you
you picked me up when I was down
my heart would break when you frowned
you were kind with all your mind
and you cared with all your soul
I loved you with all my heart
the only one who made me feel
your smiles, your hugs, your love :) (hug) (L)
every morning I would wake
I would love you with every breath I take
you lit the room with your smile
you warmed my heart with your hugs
and I loved you with all my heart
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« #27 : October 27, 2014, 02:32:01 AM »

TG

you are giving me tears of Joy

no words sound so  beautiful  as when they come
from the soul  and  from here  we  feel yours

standing ovation


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« #28 : October 27, 2014, 01:46:11 PM »

Standing next to Foxy -  clapping.   TG you touch me.


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« #29 : October 27, 2014, 06:05:33 PM »

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