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« : August 23, 2013, 09:04:47 AM »

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« #1 : August 23, 2013, 09:24:23 AM »

ROFL.... yes concerto, please go on :)

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« #2 : August 23, 2013, 09:37:26 AM »

I'm happy to see some new idea, Concerto......please, go on and sho us more!

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« #3 : August 25, 2013, 01:10:08 AM »


Well I laughed Concerto! Your humor is very English and I'm guessing that M & S is like Maceys? Is it Marks & Spencer?

please post some more!

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« #4 : August 25, 2013, 05:07:27 AM »

You're wrong concerto :) It's my honest opinion, even as mod I don't have to say everything is great ;)

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« #5 : August 25, 2013, 05:54:52 AM »

Concerto, if i don't like something, i usually tell it.......and trust me, i like a lot your idea, specially the last line!

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« #6 : August 25, 2013, 07:30:34 PM »

I like them all.
More please.
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« #7 : August 29, 2013, 10:24:21 PM »

Great idea and very enjoyable. More please.  :P


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« #8 : September 09, 2013, 11:41:49 AM »

Thanks concerto

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« #9 : September 13, 2013, 04:07:12 PM »

Hey sweetie. These are really good. they made me laugh quite bit. please make more.

now as for the critique you ask me to give.

I found your wording can be off.  be very care full and make sure your English is worded right.


 
here is an example ( yes darling, have fun?) I believe you meant to say was ( yes darling, did you have fun?)
other one. ( mmm, like you do!) think you meant to say ( mmm, like you always do!) there are other mistakes but these are just few that stood out for me.

One more thing, if you can, make them little bigger. so the words don't get squashed. some time it can be little hard to read a word.
other then that. I had no problem with then, there very good. keep up the good work honey.

love you  :-*
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« #10 : September 13, 2013, 06:10:49 PM »

your welcome Concerto.  :-*

love the new comic :)



p.s.  whats a meuf ? or did I misread it?  :P
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« #11 : September 14, 2013, 01:49:29 AM »

Also asked myself reagrding meuf..slang for muff?
But nevertheless, the last one is the best...I almost fell off my chair while laughing, picturing this scene :D :D :D

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« #12 : September 14, 2013, 03:30:42 AM »

Lol, HF, I threw them in because you complained about my English. :)

They are (French) slang words... A (une) meuf  is a woman/girl, typically a good looking one (my friends tell me that it is "femme" split in half and the two halves switched, one of many words they use like that) and a (une) garce is a bitch :)

I thought the last one was funny (well, I would, lol) but I did steal the idea from a utube video extolling the virtues or otherwise of c strings and where most people interviewed thought that it was a headband :)
« : September 14, 2013, 03:42:05 AM Concerto »
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« #13 : September 15, 2013, 03:02:24 PM »

I didn't complain  :'(  , I was just give you some advice on how to construct a sentence in English properly.  ;D

as for the slang. I am not very good with my own cultures slang much less others cultures  lol  :P

but thank you for letting me know. 

:-*


p.s. thats not stealing sweetie. thats taking a common mistake show by an interview and turning it into a joke. lots of people do that.
 I found your comic to be quite funny.  :)
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« #14 : September 19, 2013, 07:10:00 AM »

Concerto, I love your work and they always make me smile.

Keep it up girl,   Love this comic strip ;D


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