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Liberty_jazz
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« : December 06, 2013, 08:55:19 AM »

 i decided to share my sex advuntres in achat..there r lots of stories which i had up to now..
   well i begin from one of the kinkiest one ,)..that was 3-4 years ago..(i was a bit younger and more fit  ;)hmm im still so but not attractive as at my 20's ,) whatever,cut it short kids.ok telling the story ;

its about wife of my  cousin..i love him really but i sniffed a smt wrong about his wife..whenver we went out together or met in somewhre she was setting eyes on me ,secretly.i thought that it wasnt like that at first..but whenver i catch her eyes she was smiling and flasing her boobs or legs,or butts  ::)

it depended on wht she wore that day..for instance ,i cant forget her sharon stone pose for me..ohh im sure it was for me ,) when i noticed it i got a bit shy..tried to escape away from her as possible..but one day we were at dinner all family.by the time everyone talking in living room ,i wentout  to smoke in balcony..i didnt surpised she came after me..and wanted me to take a photo of her own..she was looking so happy and friendly..sure i did one but she wanted  a few more..she began to pose hotter at every turn ..

ohh damn i was so hard ..her lips,eyez all were like a pornstar..she is not a perceft fucking bitch..almost a bit fat but not so ,shes blond-curvy hair and sweet face..but she was looking at me like a whore..it was enough 3-4 mints to made me mad!!................

a couple of days later....
   i met her on the net..asked her photos and smt unusual things about me..ok got it im not fool guys  ;D asked her wht she was doing at that time..she said she was alone at home and got bored..

ohh fuck!!i asked her suddenly,to go out together if she would mind..i was surpised when was being intived her home  :o..there was nothing to do except accepting it..i drove her home in 15 mints..

and i checked her photos several times from my phone..i wasnt sure wht would happen until the ring her door..when it was opned i saw her talking on the phone wit my cousin..

it was a  summer night and so hot as i was  ;) she was wearing a summer skirt at her knees..

she invited me inside politely,by signing her eyes..at first step she put her phone at her back by staring into my eyes..

and i lost my control on a sudden..i hold her with my all power and pushed her to the wall..we were kissing,licking and sucking our each other's face..and put her butts on the shoe cabinet..took out her panties at a time from her skirt..and she did the same to my cock...ohh yesss soon iwas fucking her!!

hardly none stop fucking countiuned about 5-6 mint..so fucking sounds,screamings,swears were be able to heard from out of the door...at that point i asked her hubby (my cousin) she said fuck him !! fuck him ....several times and cummed while repeating that words...we nearly cummed together..but didnt stop till my cock getting smaller her inside..my cums were flowing back between her legs..ohh damn it was so warm..

 fuck!!as i said shes not a so fit woman..but a typical fucking married slut wife..her face is so pretty with blonde long hair..u cannot say that shes a cougar if u didnt see her like that ,)

whtver..i was so tired cause holding her white big butts at the wall..we moved to living room slowly..

ohh will be continued...there will be  a big ,big very big surprise..will complete it soon but not today..have to leave now and turn to my work again  :-\

i hope u will like wht will happen..its a surprise folks..byezz for now  :D

« : December 06, 2013, 09:38:49 PM Brandybee »
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« #1 : December 06, 2013, 11:15:24 AM »

Well.......  :-X

Welcome to the forum, Liberty_jazz.
I'm sure that shortly Brandy will post her nice words following an invitation to join the Erotic Story Contest.
I think that you should join.  :)

Have fun around.

My alley: http://www.funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,1884.0.html
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« #2 : December 06, 2013, 09:51:58 PM »

Hey Liberty_Jazz, Welcome to the Erotic story section.

Marilyn is right, I am always looking for writers to enter the Erotic Story Contest. Check it out, see if it inspires you to enter.

Forum Home Page > Announcements > Forum News > EROTIC STORY CONTEST 6 - MEDIEVAL.  http://www.funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2816.0.html    and   

Forum  Home Page >  Organisations & Events >Contests > EROTIC  STORY CONTEST  RULES  http://www.funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2509.0.html

Your story is interesting and thank you for sharing it with us.
I have taken the liberty of spacing it out a little for easier reading.  It is hard to read without the spacing as readers can easily lose their place. It also helps readers who's first language is not English.

I usually give a guideline of about 5 to 6 lines maximum and then space and paragraph but obviously it does need to flow with the story too, so its to the writers discretion. If its too hard to read though, it could put some readers off and we don't want that.
Check out the other authors here and you will see how they present their stories.  ;D

I look forward to reading more from you.
Well done at taking your first steps of publishing one of your stories / fantasies.   :-*


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