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LovingSir
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« #15 : March 06, 2015, 08:33:40 PM »
*Stands to applaud the lady.*
« : March 06, 2015, 08:35:54 PM LovingSir »
Amethyst
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« #16 : March 07, 2015, 01:19:00 AM »
Thank you so much Sir
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« #17 : April 09, 2015, 03:45:13 AM »
He lay sweating ... the palms of his hands were red hot , he'd seen her again .. and although he had this dream many times it never got any easier waking up without her .  He knew her face well every contour of her being was what he breathed .. Her spirit haunted him each time he closed his eyes she came to him .. and each time he awoke he was alone. Now though his dreams were more vivid he not only saw things he was starting to feel them too .    He reached over and took his glass of water and took a sip, knowing he wouldn't be able to settle again he picked up his guitar as he often did to find comfort,  and started to play.

Across the city she jumped up .. something had startled her , her brown eyes had turned green,  she had been fighting in her sleep again , her hair hung wild and tassled and the sheets of the bed were tangled around her legs.  She was  angry wanting to hit out and she was feeling lost and desperate,  her parents had been killed  , she could still taste the smell of fire and hear the deep animal war cries from Indian Braves as they slaughtered her family... she fought so hard to hold back the tears of dispair but it was no use she gripped her pillow and began to sob , it was all so real and she felt so alone , these nightmares were haunting her very soul.
This was the reason she had ' Achat'  group therapy in the morning  these night terrors were getting more extreme and she believed she would go insane if she didn't get some help quick.
 
The rain splashed down with the wind making it dance across the pavement, she was running late.  At last she arrived at Achat, her feet were squelching in her shoes and she really wasn't prepared for all eyes on her as she burst through the door. As she stood there with everyone looking she just wanted to turn and run.  A man approached her with his hand outstretched to introduce himself. "Hi there I'm Jim you must be Chanty", taking his hand she shook it and nodded him a yes , she tried to speak but the words just seemed  frozen and wouldn't come out . Jim directed her to a seat and she squelched her way across and sat down.
  Across the room he sat looking her over , there was something strangely familiar about her and he had this urge to scoop her up and take her away to somewhere safe , she looked delicate , fragile and he knew he had to protect her . He tried to dismiss his instincts and focus on other people in the room who were already underway talking about their sleep patterns.  Eventually it was her turn to speak and as everyone’s eyes reached her he watched her shift .. she was uncomfortable and looked anxious , he noticed she was shivering from the cold material pressing against her skin , he knew he shouldn't but the pull was too intense to ignore .   He stood and walked across to her and held out his hand to her and spoke softly, " Come with me a moment " , glad to have an excuse to escape she took his hand ,  as he led her away he apologised to Jim with a promise they would be back shortly, and they left the room .

Once outside she took a deep breath and lent against a wall, she didnt think she could do this , it was stupid of her to come and she just wanted to leave right there and then and go home and slip into something warm and drink a hot cup of chocolate .    He spoke to her  as if he had heard her thoughts , his voice deep but soft , " look at you , you are soaked , you must be freezing " he took his warm sweatshirt off and handed it to her  " here put this on , lets get you warm, your lips are almost blue " She took the jumper gratefully thanking him politely and pushed her head  into the warm material,  her body instantly glad of the heat caused her to moan softly  ,  it was instantly soothing.  She watched him kneel before her as he slipped her shoes from her feet and began drying  them with a  thick cotton handkerchief  he pulled from his coat pocket. She didn't know this stranger but she was so glad of his nurturing and she felt a strange almost electric pull to him .. it made her shiver.
« : April 09, 2015, 04:46:42 AM Amethyst »
LovingSir
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« #18 : April 09, 2015, 12:46:06 PM »
Very nice Amethyst. Glad you decided to come back to the forum too. I look forward to reading more...
Amethyst
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« #19 : April 09, 2015, 12:50:19 PM »
Thank you it was very kind of you to comment loving sir ...much appreciated x
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« #20 : April 09, 2015, 08:26:17 PM »
I agree. At last you write a much awaited story.
An interesting introduction to set the scene.  I am intrigued to read more and looking forward to the story unfolding.

Well done and I hope you enter the Erotic Story Contest.  The deadline for stories to be PM'd to me is the end of this month - Thurs 30 April 2015

Just PM your finished creation and inspiration to Brandybee in forum.

Forum Home Page > Announcements > Forum News  > EROTIC STORY CONTEST 9 - OUT OF THIS WORLD.  http://www.funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,3565.0.html   

Forum Home Page > Organizations & Events > Contests > EROTIC STORY CONTEST RULES. http://www.funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2509.0.html

Well Done and please, don't keep us waiting too long for the next instalment.

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Amethyst
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« #21 : April 10, 2015, 03:43:40 AM »
Thank you chick ..x
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« #22 : April 10, 2015, 07:33:59 AM »

really enjoyed your story  Amethyst, waiting impatiently  for  further instalments
you have  talent Amethyst  looking forward to reading more of your compositions


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« #23 : April 10, 2015, 08:05:14 AM »
Very nice start:)  Looking forward to next excerpt.
Amethyst
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« #24 : April 10, 2015, 10:48:49 AM »
Thanks guys ..I know its not word perfect but its a start and I will re - edit it ...:-)
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« #25 : April 10, 2015, 03:22:30 PM »


Willie Nelson=My Heros have always been Cowboys.
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Amethyst
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« #26 : April 11, 2015, 02:09:49 AM »
Lol thanks  ;)
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« #27 : April 24, 2015, 10:42:57 AM »
Quote from: Lover on February 24, 2015, 10:04:44 AM
Congrats Amethyst, you can be very proud! They all are wonderful, I can feel the love and your heart. Very beautiful :) My fav is Travels far and Wide

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I dont see it as an illness ... just as a blessing and a gift ...
Yes! You're absolutely right and it's the best way to see it.

Keep on writing please

Travels Far & Wide is my Favourite too ,... its very close to my heart .... Its two stories ...... One the poetic side ..but everything in this poem represents something from my real life ... For Example the Wolves howling in the distance represent abusive Adults around me when I was younger
and the Girl stands as a guard because she is protecting her siblings from the same abusive people .... The symbols of her tribe are the emotional scars left behind ........Just a little insight as to why it is close to my heart ...
Amethyst
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« #28 : May 07, 2015, 02:37:14 AM »
Fascinating Illuminations by Amethyst

Looking out of my window , what is it that I see

Fascinating Illuminations that always capture me

The ground shimmers and glistens from the mornings first dew drops

while the swallows sing out cheerfully upon the chimney tops

New buds begin to grow in the Aprils new cool breeze

Soon to be a travel stop, for the butterflies and bees

A scattering of cobwebs sparkle in the light

evidence of spiders working hard, right throughout the night

A young Doe sprites about happily , skipping acoss the ground

while its mum watches carefully no movement and without a sound

rabbits in their burrows slowly begin to appear

is it safe to exit... what is it that they hear?

Looking out of my window what is it that I see?

These fascinating illuminations that always capture me.
« : May 07, 2015, 02:39:37 AM Amethyst »
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