Touching the breast, kissing and gettint the blowjob are great. The slapping and choking seems to me a bit violent, but I'm not familiar with SM.I think this can be used in some nice kind or rp.
Hmm a cock slapping across the face? If that's what you mean Caramel, I didn't connect to that at first... I though about paddles and stuff. Well a cock slap is fine, kinda sexy.