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Discussions about sex => Erotic Stories => Topic started by: Stone on July 14, 2013, 02:10:19 PM
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This is where you can add your thoughts and comments or shoot us down in flames for our story-
The Order of the Tudor Rose.
Be kind ;D
Jayc & Stone.
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Thanks Stone and Jayc for carrying on with this great story can't wait for the next chapter keep it up
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The story begs for additional chapters.
Please continue the great work.
:)
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It's about time ;D
Good luck to you both. I know you will write a story worthy of reading. Good luck in your endeavours and I don't mind taking the blame at all. I am enthralled already.
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I'm sure it will be a great success! A new distraction for long days. And perhaps some new ideas ;)
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Best luck for this project, Stone and jayC! i know you two can do it, the success of the story in the last contest is the proof of it, sooooo......don't be so much worried and try!
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Well, Tudor Rose has certainly got my attention. It's turning out to be a very intriguing Sex club with a hint of mystery and an interesting history too.
And the sex scenes are hot ;D
Cant wait to read more. Keep up the good work.
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I like it, it's good reading. :)
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Interesting and exciting story. Finllay I had the time to read everything and hope you continue :)
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Hello ;D
We have posted the next installments of the Tudor Rose story and as some members have requested, we have tried to keep our story posts shorter to make for easier reading.
Obviously some posts will be longer than others to keep the flow of the story line, but we will try and keep the posts shorter or equal to an A4 sheet of paper
Thank you for all comments good and bad and please continue to post your comments. It's the way we learn and we can then take on your views and suggestions.
Thank you all for your support and we both hope you are all enjoying it thus far.
Best Regards.
Stone and Jayc. :-*
PS. Pafe, we are intrigued by your story too. We do hope you continue and post more.
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I like how you work off each other.
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Thanks stone and jayc... the long parts are wonderful and now the short parts are still wonderful and easy to read, especially when you're short in time.
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Lover is right.....sometimes is really hard to read a long story cause time is alway so limited! I like the idea of shorten parts posted twice a day (morning and afternoon, for example!) cause it makes all easy!
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Hiya's...
Stone and Jayc... I am loving this story. I look forward to each installment, it's well written with an air of mystery to it. Thank you both so much for sharing this with the Forum Village.
Thanks for letting me share,
Pafe
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Thank you all for your kind comments and encouragements.
We have also had some good news .. after a few little adjustments, Jayc has had his story - Big Sur - published on Literotica
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1578638&page=submissions
( Or you can get to it, by clicking on the green/blue world icon under his pic on his Forum posts )
I am really proud of him .. Well done Baby. ;D
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WOW :) Our forum gets more and more members for literotica - another prove about the big quality of many stories here. We should advertize our forum there and get members for AChat...lol.
Big congrats jayc - I'm going to vote for it asap!
I am really proud of you... Well done Baby ;D
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jeez.....after Momma_Andrea and Brandy, now Jayc! to don't mention Tight book who is out now......TRIPLE WOW! :o :o
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CONGRATULATIONS JAYC
I am really proud of you .. Well done Baby. ;D ;D ;D
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Will there beanother part of your great story?
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thats a big yes Lover, were on hiatus for a bit but there will be lots more coming in the near future and thanks for you support.
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Wonderful news jayc - was it a creative break? :)
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with the contest stories posted we thought it would be a good idea for a break and we are woking on ideas for the story and long shifts at work have led us to take a break but we will be back soon
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I have read this story to date and am gripped by where it is going. I am impressed with the thought and direction that has gone into it and am following it with interest.
Both of you write well together and your imagination is well written on the page as well as the research that both of you have obviously done.
It seems to be turning into quite an intriguing plot and the sex scenes are varied and thrilling. :P
I strongly recommend our villagers read this story. It’s hot and then some.
Keep up the good work. I am most definitely a fan and want to read more, a lot more.
Well done to you both. ;D
I hope others write their thoughts about it here too.
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I join Brandy in her words. It's a great story, hot actions and exciting plot. Did Hollywood already ask to get the performing/distribution rights?
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This is an excellent story... though the whole Dom/Sub thing is not my first choice of interest, the story line here is fascinating. The characters are well developed and I can see the plot twisting in any direction. Which to me, makes for good reading. It reads like watching a film, and I like my books that way.
I have a vivid imagination, and it's easy for me to immerse myself into a good book. This story is doing that for me... not as a participant, but as an observer.
I look forward to each installment of this and I'm anxiously awaiting the next one. There's things I'd like to see happen, and I'm hoping they do.
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Hiya guys been reading your story its pretty good have to be honest not really into the whole bdsm but it is still very well written well done puts my work to shame a bit congratulations.
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Thank you all for all your kind words and encouragement. We have also received PM's that have been very useful to us.
We take your BDSM comments on board and will be including vanilla scenes too as the story progresses.
Covems, you mentioned some ideas you would like to see happen, please PM us your thoughts, who knows, maybe we could work some ideas in, if it fits with our story line.
Thank you again for your comments. Please continue to do so, good and bad.
This is our first attempt at a large story and all advice, creative critisims, and suggestions can only help us to improve.
If you are too shy to post, tell Brandybee, she isn't. ;D
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The stories are great, please carry on with them just as you have been. xx
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Thanks bluedenim - We hoped you may like the spanking scene. ;)
Everyone, Please keep your comments coming. Its the only way we can improve and know if you are enjoying our efforts or not.
If you prefer to post anonymous, I have got Brandybee to agree to post for you and she will not divulge your name to us. Then we can take any comments on board - good and bad to improve our Story.
Thanks to all who have posted so far, either here or in PM.
A special thank you to Bear, who's advice and guidance has been invaluable.