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Discussions about sex => Erotic Stories => Topic started by: hentaiboy69 on January 27, 2015, 05:12:54 PM
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Aaaand here we go!
After some hard work and thanks to the wonderful work of our Stories Queen (aka Brandy!), the first part of my last work is on! The story is all done and Brandy is working on the final part of it, so week after week you will read it till the end. But, hey.....don't be too sure it's going to be the end, if I now Rhua very well as I do, she will share with us more of her adventure and I'll be happy to let you read them!
So, be patiente and start to read......and please, let me know your true impression!
HB
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A little note:
this story was originally born to celebrate the begin of the new year and I started it in time, but more I wrote, more the entire project become complex and, dulcis in fundo, it lead to something I m preparing for the forum, supported by the other mods!
Stay tuned for news!
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Thoroughly enjoying your story HB, its an insight into an orientation I know very little about.
I can tell you have worked hard on this and that you have written from the heart.
Well Done and I love your enthusiasm.
Hugs.
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Thanks for cheering me up, Brandy! I appreciated it so much!
*hugs*
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Let me echo Brandy in saying i am enjoying the story,
Keep up the good work my friend :)
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@JayC: thanks for the support, my friend!
@all the AChat writers: I'd like to put under your attention a question about the way to write a certain thing. In the new story of Rhua sexual experience, she he talking about an old experience she got with a guy. So I'm writing it as a long dialague but maybe I must insert a dialogue inside it, as if she's remembering a chat she had at that time. Now, I'm pondering how to make it visiblew in the text.
Any suggestion!?
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You can use another colour and also start a new segment, showing it by starting with ****
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I did something similar in my short story "Train of Thought" going from the present, remembering the past and back again.
I think it worked ok. Take a look see what you think.
http://www.literotica.com/s/train-of-thought-3
Good Luck.
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Uhhhmmmmm........those are both solution I don't like too much, honestly.....will see! Anyway, thanks to both for the help!
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Aaaaand......done! The first story about Rhua is finally complete here and more will follow, I hope!
Next step for Rhua is to syubmit her adventure on Literotica and on another website, then.......I don't know when a new story will pop out here! Let's see!
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Nice story HB. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for all your hard work and sharing it with us.
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A lovely story and an insight into the twilight world of cross dressing and same sex relations.
I enjoyed all of it and Well done to you, especially writing in a different language to your mother tongue. Massive Respect.
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Thanks for the nice words, Stone, but Brandy had gave me a big support in adjusting my poor English! She's a very precious and dear friend! *hugs and kisses for BB*
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While I'm working on the next story of Rhua adventure, this is a scheme about the apartment she rent In Rome! Hope you like it!
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Good morning to all you, my friends an lovely Readers!
Finally, after a forced hiatus of a month and half, I was able to put my hands back on Rhua adventures!
Anyway, I'm far away to have done with this chapter which she pretended ready for Easter (trust me, she is annoying when you don't listen at her! :-\) but I swear her and to you it will be done soon as possible!
Meanwhile, she asked me to reveal to you the title of it: The Easter Bunny! Dan Dara Daaaan!
Stay tuned for news!
P.s.: The Chronicles are still in progress, but Rhua is soooooo noicy that I must listen at her, no matter what! Poor Lady, she felt lonely! :'(
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Looking forward to reading HB. As always your exuberance and enthusiasm makes me smile and enriches my life.
Hugs. x
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I'll do my best, Brandy! If a writer didn't put some enthusiasm in what he do, it's over...........nothing good can came out of his pen! It's the same for every artists, no matter the type of arts he/she is working on......enthusiasm is the main word!