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Title: I'm Autistic let my words paint you some pictures
Post by: Amethyst on February 24, 2015, 07:50:46 AM: "Kindred Spirit" (Lyrics by Cindy Lauper)

If you think you're hearing something
And you can't think what it is
If you feel a quiet longing
Lift your heart into the wind
There you'll find my kindred spirit
There you'll meet me as a friend
It is just a kindred feeling
And a song to let you in...

Just to clarify All of the work here on my post is my own work ...that is with the exception of the above ' Kindred Spirit ' ..this is actually a b side track of Cyndi Lauper which I adore ....and went on to use the nick Kindred Spirit ....I am known as SweetCaress and also as ' Torn ' ...thanks :-)

Travels far and Wide By Amethyst aka SweetCaress .

I often close my eyes travelling far and wide
to a land where my imagination begins to come alive
the colours so clear and perfect , the scenes as plain as day
Imagination being but a thought away

A young Indian Girl with eyes as the darkest night
not afraid of the wilderness that surrounds her
learned early to hunt and fight
her clothes are symbols of her tribe
her paint reflects her stance
while her elegance and fury create an hypnotic dance
golden flames from her fire , burn until the dawn
her soul like the wildest wind there wherever to have blown
wolves howling in the distance letting other animals know
they occupy this territory thats blanketed by snow
she hears their distant cries , alert and wide awake
standing as a guard , beside the frozen lake
she doesn't feel the cold air , that you and I would feel
for she lives in my imagination , where pain is never real x

My Chest By Amethyst

Souls on fire, passions entwined
The love I sought, the love I'll find
Plans I'll make without mistake,
The love she craves, she wont forsake
Each step I'll make , I'll make with thee
Bound by love, tied in matrimony
A promise of my soul I give
To hear her, breathe her , makes me live
Plans unfold as a blossom grows,
Her tiny hands , her button nose
Smiles are shared, a family made
Melodies of life,once more are played
Looking on wistfully, her beauty grows
Soon to be another's rose
She'll take his hand and say 'I do'
Her love so fine , so pure, so true
My time has passed, my job is done
Kept her safe , from all things wrong
Memories safe within my heart
A treasured locket that's set apart
Upon my chest ,I bare the crest
This circle of life has made its nest.

Silhouette By Amethyst

The sun above begins to set,
Against two shadows of silhouette
upon the beach they sit so free
gazing out across the sea
in the distance some seagulls fly
engulf the freedom of the sky
she rests her head upon his chest
wishing this could be her permanent nest
the waves slowly begin to leave the shore
sounds like they whisper as they gently flow
contentedly locked within his arms
she surrenders all thoughts to his loving charms xxx
Title: Re: I'm Autistic let my words paint you some pictures
Post by: PitVK on February 24, 2015, 08:59:52 AM: I like these. My favorite is "My Chest". Good work. :)
Title: Re: I'm Autistic let my words paint you some pictures
Post by: FoxyRoxxy on February 24, 2015, 09:12:21 AM: Very nice Amethyst

Having a illnesses dose not stop any one from achieving our dreams & inspirations
the only thing that stops us is not going for it that's what is the only Illnesses that prevent's
us .

Keep posting I like your writing ..

Roxxy :)
Title: Re: I'm Autistic let my words paint you some pictures
Post by: Amethyst on February 24, 2015, 09:23:11 AM: Quote from: FoxyRoxxy on February 24, 2015, 09:12:21 AM
Very nice Amethyst

Having a illnesses dose not stop any one from achieving our dreams & inspirations
the only thing that stops us is not going for it that's what is the only Illnesses that prevent's
us .

I dont see it as an illness ... just as a blessing and a gift ...
Keep posting I like your writing ..

. thank you Roxy :) I wil

Roxxy :)
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Post by: Hungrybearr on February 24, 2015, 10:01:32 AM: Just beautiful, Amethyst.
Makes me want to hear more.
Title: Re: I'm Autistic let my words paint you some pictures
Post by: Lover on February 24, 2015, 10:04:44 AM: Congrats Amethyst, you can be very proud! They all are wonderful, I can feel the love and your heart. Very beautiful :) My fav is Travels far and Wide

Quote
I dont see it as an illness ... just as a blessing and a gift ...
Yes! You're absolutely right and it's the best way to see it.

Keep on writing please
Title: Re: I'm Autistic let my words paint you some pictures
Post by: Amethyst on February 24, 2015, 11:37:49 AM: Thank you ..I will ..its nice to know someone likes them as they are very dear to me ... *smiles*
Title: Re: I'm Autistic let my words paint you some pictures
Post by: Amethyst on February 24, 2015, 11:38:45 AM: thank you Hungrybear :-)
Title: Re: I'm Autistic let my words paint you some pictures
Post by: Brandybee on February 24, 2015, 11:42:23 AM: I love your writing. Its all very beautiful. Every single one is my favourite.

Thank you for sharing it here in Forum.

Have you thought of publishing on Literotica too and widen your audience? :)
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Post by: Amethyst on February 24, 2015, 11:48:08 AM: Thank you Brandy ...no not heard of it before ?
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Post by: Brandybee on February 24, 2015, 12:06:03 PM: Forum Home Page > Announcements > Forum News > Talented Writers in Achat's Forum - you betch ya! :)
http://www.funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2668.0.html

It has a non-erotic poem section. I have one posted there myself. :)

Let me know if you send in your poems. I would suggest a separate submission for each poem :) Once accepted, you could join in our Hall of Fame :)
Title: Re: I'm Autistic let my words paint you some pictures
Post by: Stone on February 24, 2015, 12:40:33 PM: Amethyst,

Congratulations for finding the courage to publish your writings here.

Your poems are astounding. Those tasters and I am a fan. Please post more of your work here first.
Then join Literotica.

We want first preview of all your work.

Well Done to you.

Stone & Jayc. xx
Title: Re: I'm Autistic let my words paint you some pictures
Post by: Amethyst on February 24, 2015, 12:59:59 PM: thank you ...I'll think on it :-)
Title: Re: I'm Autistic let my words paint you some pictures
Post by: Amethyst on February 24, 2015, 11:34:56 PM: I have my own poetry page on Facebook with more pieces ...however when I write new stuff I'll gladly post here for you to see first :-)
Title: Re: I'm Autistic let my words paint you some pictures
Post by: Brandybee on February 25, 2015, 05:43:57 AM: Thank you Amethyst,

I think you know already by the above posts, your writings and poems are appreciated and you are building up a fan base.

Thank you for sharing them and letting us have first preview on any new work you do.
Title: Re: I'm Autistic let my words paint you some pictures
Post by: LovingSir on March 06, 2015, 08:33:40 PM: *Stands to applaud the lady.*
Title: Re: I'm Autistic let my words paint you some pictures
Post by: Amethyst on March 07, 2015, 01:19:00 AM: Thank you so much Sir
Title: Love is a ' Whisper Away ' PART 1
Post by: Amethyst on April 09, 2015, 03:45:13 AM: He lay sweating ... the palms of his hands were red hot , he'd seen her again .. and although he had this dream many times it never got any easier waking up without her . He knew her face well every contour of her being was what he breathed .. Her spirit haunted him each time he closed his eyes she came to him .. and each time he awoke he was alone. Now though his dreams were more vivid he not only saw things he was starting to feel them too . He reached over and took his glass of water and took a sip, knowing he wouldn't be able to settle again he picked up his guitar as he often did to find comfort, and started to play.

Across the city she jumped up .. something had startled her , her brown eyes had turned green, she had been fighting in her sleep again , her hair hung wild and tassled and the sheets of the bed were tangled around her legs. She was angry wanting to hit out and she was feeling lost and desperate, her parents had been killed , she could still taste the smell of fire and hear the deep animal war cries from Indian Braves as they slaughtered her family... she fought so hard to hold back the tears of dispair but it was no use she gripped her pillow and began to sob , it was all so real and she felt so alone , these nightmares were haunting her very soul.
This was the reason she had ' Achat' group therapy in the morning these night terrors were getting more extreme and she believed she would go insane if she didn't get some help quick.

The rain splashed down with the wind making it dance across the pavement, she was running late. At last she arrived at Achat, her feet were squelching in her shoes and she really wasn't prepared for all eyes on her as she burst through the door. As she stood there with everyone looking she just wanted to turn and run. A man approached her with his hand outstretched to introduce himself. "Hi there I'm Jim you must be Chanty", taking his hand she shook it and nodded him a yes , she tried to speak but the words just seemed frozen and wouldn't come out . Jim directed her to a seat and she squelched her way across and sat down.
Across the room he sat looking her over , there was something strangely familiar about her and he had this urge to scoop her up and take her away to somewhere safe , she looked delicate , fragile and he knew he had to protect her . He tried to dismiss his instincts and focus on other people in the room who were already underway talking about their sleep patterns. Eventually it was her turn to speak and as everyone’s eyes reached her he watched her shift .. she was uncomfortable and looked anxious , he noticed she was shivering from the cold material pressing against her skin , he knew he shouldn't but the pull was too intense to ignore . He stood and walked across to her and held out his hand to her and spoke softly, " Come with me a moment " , glad to have an excuse to escape she took his hand , as he led her away he apologised to Jim with a promise they would be back shortly, and they left the room .

Once outside she took a deep breath and lent against a wall, she didnt think she could do this , it was stupid of her to come and she just wanted to leave right there and then and go home and slip into something warm and drink a hot cup of chocolate . He spoke to her as if he had heard her thoughts , his voice deep but soft , " look at you , you are soaked , you must be freezing " he took his warm sweatshirt off and handed it to her " here put this on , lets get you warm, your lips are almost blue " She took the jumper gratefully thanking him politely and pushed her head into the warm material, her body instantly glad of the heat caused her to moan softly , it was instantly soothing. She watched him kneel before her as he slipped her shoes from her feet and began drying them with a thick cotton handkerchief he pulled from his coat pocket. She didn't know this stranger but she was so glad of his nurturing and she felt a strange almost electric pull to him .. it made her shiver.
Title: Re: Love is a ' Whisper Away ' PART 1
Post by: LovingSir on April 09, 2015, 12:46:06 PM: Very nice Amethyst. Glad you decided to come back to the forum too. I look forward to reading more...
Title: Re: Love is a ' Whisper Away ' PART 1
Post by: Amethyst on April 09, 2015, 12:50:19 PM: Thank you it was very kind of you to comment loving sir ...much appreciated x
Title: Re: Love is a ' Whisper Away ' PART 1
Post by: Brandybee on April 09, 2015, 08:26:17 PM: I agree. At last you write a much awaited story.
An interesting introduction to set the scene. I am intrigued to read more and looking forward to the story unfolding.

Well done and I hope you enter the Erotic Story Contest. The deadline for stories to be PM'd to me is the end of this month - Thurs 30 April 2015

Just PM your finished creation and inspiration to Brandybee in forum.

Forum Home Page > Announcements > Forum News > EROTIC STORY CONTEST 9 - OUT OF THIS WORLD. http://www.funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,3565.0.html

Forum Home Page > Organizations & Events > Contests > EROTIC STORY CONTEST RULES. http://www.funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2509.0.html

Well Done and please, don't keep us waiting too long for the next instalment.
Title: Re: Love is a ' Whisper Away ' PART 1
Post by: Amethyst on April 10, 2015, 03:43:40 AM: Thank you chick ..x
Title: Re: Love is a ' Whisper Away ' PART 1
Post by: AusWoody on April 10, 2015, 07:33:59 AM: really enjoyed your story Amethyst, waiting impatiently for further instalments
you have talent Amethyst looking forward to reading more of your compositions

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Title: Re: Love is a ' Whisper Away ' PART 1
Post by: SexxxyTexan on April 10, 2015, 08:05:14 AM: Very nice start:) Looking forward to next excerpt.
Title: Re: Love is a ' Whisper Away ' PART 1
Post by: Amethyst on April 10, 2015, 10:48:49 AM: Thanks guys ..I know its not word perfect but its a start and I will re - edit it ...:-)
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Post by: Sam_Hawke on April 10, 2015, 03:22:30 PM: (http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-Q2Yz_ayATC8/T39ugbT4ZoI/AAAAAAAABYA/-T8eYLW4kFg/s1600/awesome.jpeg)
Title: Re: Love is a ' Whisper Away ' PART 1
Post by: Amethyst on April 11, 2015, 02:09:49 AM: Lol thanks ;)
Title: Re: I'm Autistic let my words paint you some pictures
Post by: Amethyst on April 24, 2015, 10:42:57 AM: Quote from: Lover on February 24, 2015, 10:04:44 AM
Congrats Amethyst, you can be very proud! They all are wonderful, I can feel the love and your heart. Very beautiful :) My fav is Travels far and Wide

Quote
I dont see it as an illness ... just as a blessing and a gift ...
Yes! You're absolutely right and it's the best way to see it.

Keep on writing please

Travels Far & Wide is my Favourite too ,... its very close to my heart .... Its two stories ...... One the poetic side ..but everything in this poem represents something from my real life ... For Example the Wolves howling in the distance represent abusive Adults around me when I was younger
and the Girl stands as a guard because she is protecting her siblings from the same abusive people .... The symbols of her tribe are the emotional scars left behind ........Just a little insight as to why it is close to my heart ...
Title: Re: I'm Autistic let my words paint you some pictures
Post by: Amethyst on May 07, 2015, 02:37:14 AM: Fascinating Illuminations by Amethyst

Looking out of my window , what is it that I see

Fascinating Illuminations that always capture me

The ground shimmers and glistens from the mornings first dew drops

while the swallows sing out cheerfully upon the chimney tops

New buds begin to grow in the Aprils new cool breeze

Soon to be a travel stop, for the butterflies and bees

A scattering of cobwebs sparkle in the light

evidence of spiders working hard, right throughout the night

A young Doe sprites about happily , skipping acoss the ground

while its mum watches carefully no movement and without a sound

rabbits in their burrows slowly begin to appear

is it safe to exit... what is it that they hear?

Looking out of my window what is it that I see?

These fascinating illuminations that always capture me.