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« : September 19, 2013, 07:29:05 AM »

Hope you don't mind Pafe, but I wanted to comment on your story and as you decided to lock it,  realised you didn't wish for comments to break up your story.

I am enjoying your story  girl,  and am following it with interest.  I think it may follow a path that is not my usual orientation but  that matters not.  I am glad that you decided to write your story and like that stories here will cater for all tastes, as the erotic story section should.

Thank you for sharing, it's well written and intriguing.   Your efforts are appreciated  very much.

I look forward to reading more.


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« #1 : September 22, 2013, 10:22:25 AM »

love the story, Pafe and i like your writing style. i look forward to reading more  :)
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« #2 : October 04, 2013, 08:16:16 AM »


Pafe, I'm very intrigued by this story... I believe I know what's it about, and though, as Brandy Bee mentioned, it's probably headed in a direction not of my orientation, I still find it fascinating.   Please keep posting it.


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« #3 : October 06, 2013, 04:11:08 AM »

Thoroughly enjoying this prequel to your Contest entry. Seeing how the characters are building and how they met.

Cant wait to read more.


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