I have read all the stories several times, and am yet again, overwhelmed by the talent, inspired ideas and efforts that have gone into them. I have enjoyed every single one for different reasons and I am, yet again going to have difficulties casting my vote.
Thank you to all the authors who have spent time and effort into entering the competition and I for one, am enjoying them immensely.
Here's my little summary of the stories for Contest 4 – First Time, and why I like each and every one. This is not a critique, just a summary of my thoughts.
1. The Order Of The Tudor Rose. - This is an interesting idea & a story of a secret sex club, where people can only join by special invitation & it seems fulfil their inner most fantasies . It’s hot, very erotic , very well written and seems to have great potential for further chapters and serials. I am intrigued by this and definitely would like to read more about this Tudor Rose Order.
2. First Customer. - A short , sweet & hot salesman story. A man’s fantasy , I think of a naughty customer .
3. That Black Box ! - An interesting story of a lady finding something unexpected to cause her great concern but is all, what it seems? .. Well written , hot & a nice twist that brings a smile to your face.
4. First Time on a Ranch.- A well written, woman’s hot fantasy with a cowboy, not that I am biased in anyway , a barn , hay, bulging chest muscles, cowboy hat mmmm --- I do picture my sexy spouse here, I wonder why??
5. A Night on the Car Bonnet .- A night out and the car breaks down on the way home. What will they do as they wait for recovery?? It’s hot, erotic and a reflection of the author’s very naughty mind
6. We Take Care of Our Own. - A well written and hot story about a couple of wives at home whilst their soldier husbands are posted away. An interesting insight into loneliness & lustful need.
7. Mile High Delight . A hot, erotic & naughty story of two strangers that meet on an aeroplane flight , with a very very surprising & somewhat unexpected twist.
8. A TGirl Diary. A well written diary of love, lust & hidden need, it intrigues, it interests and you have to read right up to the end.
9. Cross Dressing Adventures: The Exclusive Club - A man’s thrill of dressing as a woman and attending an exclusive club, where he is taken on an exciting adventure. The cross dressing aspect is a first for the Erotic contests . Highly exciting & horny being taken control of by a woman.
10. First Night.- The first planned meet of online lovers, where a storm forces them to change their weekend plans , very, naughty and very wicked indeed.
11. Undisclosed Desires of My Heart . A story of an arranged meet with an old friend, discovering their desires and creating happy memories for the years after... a lovely story of a stolen night together. Very hot and erotic.
12. Real Date Surprise. - A Salesman story of intriguing naughty toys to attach to your computer, a nice surprise that leads to a very hot and horny encounter with a customer. An exciting , interesting read.
13. The Porn Lady. A story of unusual visitors to a ranch. Very well written & sexually stimulating.
14. The Neighbour. A story of a young man’s first sexual encounter. Very well written and thought out. Makes you wonder if it’s partially true.
As you can see, I like all of them for different reasons.. decisions, decisions ... I think, I will have to read them all over again.
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