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This is where you can add your thoughts and comments or shoot us down in flames  for our story-

The Order of the Tudor Rose.

Be kind   ;D

Jayc  &   Stone.

« : August 06, 2013, 03:40:18 AM hentaiboy69 »

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« #1 : July 14, 2013, 02:19:39 PM »

Thanks Stone and Jayc for carrying on with this great story can't wait for the next chapter keep it up

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« #2 : July 14, 2013, 05:02:14 PM »

The story begs for additional chapters.
Please continue the great work.
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« #3 : July 14, 2013, 06:40:21 PM »

It's about time   ;D

Good luck to you both.   I know you will write a story worthy of reading.  Good luck in your endeavours and I don't mind taking the blame at all. I am enthralled already. 


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« #4 : July 15, 2013, 02:25:34 AM »

I'm sure it will be a great success! A new distraction for long days. And perhaps some new ideas ;)

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« #5 : July 15, 2013, 02:36:19 AM »

Best luck for this project, Stone and jayC! i know you two can do it, the success of the story in the last contest is the proof of it, sooooo......don't be so much worried and try!
« : July 15, 2013, 11:22:32 AM hentaiboy69 »

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« #6 : July 17, 2013, 04:19:31 PM »

Well,  Tudor Rose has certainly got my attention. It's turning out to be a very intriguing Sex club with a hint of  mystery and an interesting history too. 

And the sex scenes are hot  ;D

Cant wait to read more.   Keep up the good work.


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« #7 : July 18, 2013, 12:09:25 AM »

I like it, it's good reading. :)



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« #8 : July 27, 2013, 04:44:08 PM »

Interesting and exciting story. Finllay I had the time to read everything and hope you continue :)

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« #9 : August 03, 2013, 04:04:46 PM »

Hello  ;D

We have posted the next installments of the Tudor Rose story and as some members have requested, we have tried to keep our  story posts shorter to make for easier reading.

Obviously some posts will be longer than others to keep the flow of the story line, but we will try and keep the posts shorter or equal to an A4 sheet of paper

Thank you for all comments good and bad and please continue to post your comments. It's the way we learn and we can then take on your views and suggestions.

Thank you all for your support and we both hope you are all enjoying it thus far.

Best Regards.

Stone and Jayc.   :-*

PS.  Pafe, we are intrigued by your story too. We do hope you continue and post more.


« : August 03, 2013, 04:14:36 PM Stone »

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« #10 : August 07, 2013, 07:28:28 PM »

I like how you work off each other.
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« #11 : August 08, 2013, 02:00:24 AM »

Thanks stone and jayc...  the long parts are wonderful and now the short parts are still wonderful and easy to read, especially when you're short in time.

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« #12 : August 08, 2013, 02:04:13 AM »

Lover is right.....sometimes is really hard to read a long story cause time is alway so limited! I like the idea of shorten parts posted twice a day (morning and afternoon, for example!) cause it makes all easy!

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« #13 : August 08, 2013, 06:55:02 AM »

Hiya's...

   Stone and Jayc... I am loving this story.  I look forward to each installment, it's well written with an air of mystery to it.  Thank you both so much for sharing this with the Forum Village.

Thanks for letting me share,
Pafe

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« #14 : August 09, 2013, 11:45:39 AM »

Thank you all for your kind comments and encouragements.

We have also had some good news ..  after a few little adjustments,  Jayc has had his story - Big Sur -  published on Literotica

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1578638&page=submissions
( Or you can get to it, by clicking on the green/blue world icon under his pic on his Forum posts )


I am really proud of him ..  Well done Baby.   ;D
« : August 09, 2013, 01:05:43 PM Stone »

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