Question time, here!While I'm working to the new chapter (dunno when it will be ready), I had done some modify on the first two, making the whole story a page longer, so I'll going to re-post all the story, cause I had found several error I fixed.Meanwhile, I was pondering about a thing: if I have to rework everything in third person (with out linking it with the tale) or leave it in first. Opinion!?