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  • November 8, 2011 at 11:23 pm #5365
    islandsun
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    You have the lights turned down real low and candles every where.
    soft romantic music on the radio.
    Patiently waiting for me to come home.
    I arrive , you embrace me in your arms.
    Start slow dancing, swaying to the music.
    slow dancing you and your Sunny girl.
    My head nuzzled into your chest.
    My hips pressing, grinding harder into your body.
    A delicious wicked smile forming on my face.
    Feeling the results, effect I`m having on your hard body.
    Looking up ,tense.
    you starring down into my bewitching sparkling flashing green eyes.
    There is no mistake you know I want you.
    Leaning down, keepineye contact , you softly bite my bottom lip.
    Tongues mingling slowly,feveorishly, discovering tasting.
    Raking my tongue over your teeth, aggressivelyexploring the walls of your mouth.
    Hmmmmmmmmmmmm , our moans…. more urgently vociferous.

    will cont……….. smile

    this story wiil get ……well …..hope don`t offend anyone !  ;D

    November 9, 2011 at 1:06 pm #54531
    islandsun
    Participant

    Your hands on my hips pressing me harder into your thigh.
    Breaking our intense kissing long enough…..My hands shaking to hurrily unbottoning his shirt.
    Your hands pulling on my shirt..flipping upwards off up over my head.
    Throwing it to the floor…. Helping me with my shaking hands, aiding me with  the discarding of your shirt.
    You resume planting hard wet kisses along my neck , shoulders, nibbling on my ear.
    Were very vocal with my moans and your soft growling sounds coming up from the pit of your stomach ,up through yor chest.
    Sending me almost over the edge.
    You whisper in my ear…..Sunny….. I`m going to make you scream….begging for me to FUCK you…..and make no doubt about it .
    Sunny baby …..You will be screaming my name !
    Slowly backing towards the butcher block table, pinning my back side up against it.
    Smoothly caressing my hands over your muscular shouldres, down your strong arms, to your chest tweaking one peck.
    Not to ignore , I begin  sucking the other peck tugging gently with my teeth.
    Your groans … tell me I`m on the right track.
    You unhook my black lacy bra…… with my bra discarded…Cupping my breasts in your hands.. kneeing them.
    Pinching … tugging on my nipples, tweaking with forefinger and thumb.

    will cont….. ;D

    November 9, 2011 at 9:08 pm #54532
    islandsun
    Participant

    Time to let out the beast.
    I`m undoing your belt buckle, your moaning while I`m rubbing your throbbing bulge , unzipping your jeans.
    Your commando , your enormous pulsating cock leaps forward.
    You unzip my skirt: it falls down around my ankles.
    You stroke and feel evidence how moist my black lacy thong is.
    were stroking each other, assume vigorous kissing.
    sliding down my thong, I  flip it with my skirt off to the side w my foot.
    Your jeans are toss aside as well.
    My eyes are closed.
    You hold me at arms lenght.
    You tell me to open my eyes.
    My hearts pounding, chest is heaving.
    Again  Sunny your eyes open them.
    I do as you say.
    Your eyes , your body shows the yearning need of me .
    Taking me in a strong embrace, crushing your mouth down on mine.
    You know what you`re doing  staying under control.
    I can`t take this tingling sensation boiling up from my very core .
    I`m in need of release.
    Your grinning knowing !
    lifts me up, sits me on the butcher block table.

    Feel free to comment > I just started writing last yr here !
    And yes I know it`s crude writing ! ;)   hehehehe xxx Sunny

    November 12, 2011 at 8:50 pm #54533
    islandsun
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    You lean down into me ,kisses my eyes, nose , mouth .
    Trailing wet kisses down my neck , shoulders down to my breasts , cupping each breast with your hands .
    Sucking , bitting, tugging my sensitive nipples,hmmmmmmmmmm
    I`m leaned back on my elbows, eyes closed savouring every tingling sensation , what your doing to me.
    Ahhhhhhhhhh Damn baby that feels good.
    You continue administering kisses , licks , soft gently bites, lower, licks my belly button.
    Tickles where my belly ring is, and it gives me extra pleasure , when licked .
    I did`nt realize , being I`m in utopia state.
    You bring a chair over to the butcher blocktable .
    Stare down on me ,grins looking at my glistening heart shape pussy .
    Being I shave it heart shape always.
    My heads back , eyess closed , anticipating what`s to come.
    Feeling your hot breath on me .
    You tell me to open my eyes ……….. Sunny  look ! baby ! look at me !
    I look down….. he`s between my legs….inches away from my honey pot…… looking up grinning………… your eyes sparkling with that devilish look……. Sunny  you`re going to like this better .
    He breaths in my natural scent …… mingled with a slite hint of vanilla ……. lowers his head…..uses his tongue…… separates…..the folds ….. my soaked wet pussy lips….You say…..I like how wet you are.
    He slightly chuckles a couple of nips and licks……. Baby gets absolutely drenched .

    Grinning to himself says I like I it !

    will cont

    December 4, 2011 at 11:45 pm #54534
    islandsun
    Participant

    PLZ TELL ME GUY SOME THING NEW TO THIS A WANT SOME INPULL > new to writing

    December 5, 2011 at 2:08 am #54535
    Bear
    Participant

    ummm… I am sitting here with a hardon… waiting for the continuation of your story sunny..

    that is unless you are awaiting more direct intimate “input”  ;)

    December 5, 2011 at 2:23 pm #54536
    islandsun
    Participant

    @ Bear  hehehehe I have story finished just , finding time !

    and far as hardon >Close your eyes, Touch your self for me baby ! Imagine riding hard  a wild little filly , your trying to tame > good luck with that  !! ;) xxx Sunny  lol  hmmmm Cowboy w hardon  > I`m grinning

    December 6, 2011 at 1:47 am #54537
    West69
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    @ Bear  hehehehe I have story finished just , finding time !

    and far as hardon >Close your eyes, Touch your self for me baby ! Imagine riding hard  a wild little filly , your trying to tame > good luck with that  !! ;) xxx Sunny   lol  hmmmm Cowboy w hardon  > I`m grinning

    Dammit, Bear got there first! :o. In all seriousness, I hope you are entering this or another story in the contest. Your writing is very erotic.

    PS Since I like to cook, you had me imagining one of the antique butcher blocks used for centuries in a fine restaurant in Europe. They are wonderfully concave with years of use, reflecting the history of romantic dinners gone by. I see you lowering your smooth cheeks into the impression  in the wood, thighs parting to greet your lover, creating a delight for the tongue…………………………..dammit Bear. Nevermind, I am going now. Its' impolite to watch.  :-X

    December 8, 2011 at 11:12 pm #54538
    islandsun
    Participant

    He goes down with a long hot lick along my clit……. I`m moaning, my breath is laboured … hearts pounding .
    I have both of mine hands on the back of your head pushing , trying to push him farther into me .
    He does`nt hold back …..Inserts 2 fingers into me, working them in and out….while flicking his tongue  up and down my hot wet channel.
    Tugging on my nub with his teeth.

    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YES  ! BABY !……… He`s holding my hips down… cause of my thrusting …..keeping me from falling off the butcher block table.
    My body was`nt under my control any more…….As my pussy juices flow….gushes….He licks …. lapping , savouring  me.
    All the sweet nectar if what my body has to offer.
    Just has i`m about to explode again…… He stops……..I say what the………. Sunny say it !
    Now i`m beyond control…. No I`m delirious…… Screw this damn pride !
    Yes… I need you to fuck me…. I want that huge thick cock inside me !…… He grins… stands up gives me a crushing kiss upon my lips.
    Picks me up… sets me gently on the floor.

    December 8, 2011 at 11:25 pm #54539
    islandsun
    Participant

    Turn around Sunny … I comply.. I leans over the butcher block table ….puckers my small butt up towards him.

    Feels his huge cock sliding back and forth along my slick wet channel …….I breathlessly … Come on baby ! please >…   He directs his throbbing crown to my openning moist dripping wet honey hole.
    Slowly Inch by inch .. bitting my bottom lip Our moans in unison… he bends forward cups my small breasts … kneeing.. pinching… tugging on my extreme sensitive , now acking throbbing nipples.

    December 9, 2011 at 10:45 pm #54540
    islandsun
    Participant

    Hmmmmmmmmm…. he starts thrusting deeper …. harder ……sheer ecstasty….sending convulsions rippling my through my body..head to curling toes….
    I`m not even aware my small hips slamming in ti the butcher block….. or gave thought what bruises.. I might receive.
    I did`nt want him to stop… he`s poung harder faster deeper  …… Growls in my ear …. come for me sunny…. God your pussy`s so tight around my dick…My rhythmic pulses sending him in utopia …. ecstasy frenzy..Thrusting …… FUCK ME BABY !
    In harmony He and I have the most massive explosive climax.
    He shot loads and loads his hot jizz into me, ….. while my own shuddering tidal waves mingles with his head on……
    With him roaring out……….AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH …………. SUNNNNNNNNNNNY !!!!!!!!!!
    And I am screaming ………… his name.

    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHMMMMMMMMMM …………. MARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRK !!!!!!!!!!!!

    Then in a distance…. a sound … beep….beep…BEEP… BEEP…  BEEP, GETS LOUDER !

    My eyes flutter open….. leans over shuts alarm off.
    I get up out of bed …. yawns… stretches…. and walks… to the kitchen.

    I`m grinning…… hehehehehehe ……why I have this silly grin on my face…..well I`m looking at my butcher block table.

    Wink and yes I`m Smiling !

    Enjoy !    ;)

    December 10, 2011 at 1:33 am #54541
    islandsun
    Participant

    plz tell me if I should even keep writing ……….ANY COMMENTS ARE WELCOME  !!!!

    > LITTLE . Sunny  . SMILE  ;D

    December 10, 2011 at 5:24 am #54542
    West69
    Participant

    plz tell me if I should even keep writing ……….ANY COMMENTS ARE WELCOME  !!!!

    > LITTLE . Sunny  . SMILE  ;D

    With great respect and some admiration, the best advice I can give you is to reflect more on your question. Writers don't need affirmation to  write. Something inside you will be nagging you to write, pulling and pushing you, so feel the need to cast your thoughts on paper. If you are asking if an audience enjoys your work, I certainly do. You have raw talent that needs polishing, but that comes with repeated effort. You also seem to enjoy writing. Don't take that for granted. Many of us have written stories, reports, papers, etc. as part of a job assignment. “Enjoyment” would have been a beckoning mistress. Writing without passion is like sex without love. So, Islandsun, I cannot tell you if “you should keep writing”. You will need to determine that. :) :) :) :-*

    December 10, 2011 at 2:55 pm #54543
    islandsun
    Participant

    @ West69  thank you !

    I do know my writing is a bit on the crude side , I have used real friends in my stories , so perhaps thats why I hold back some !

    My next story will be made up character , we`ll see how that turns out !

    As a beginner I feel I do alright ! hehehehe Had a friend tell me I write porn >I said really thought I just wrote what 2 people actually do while having sex . Guess I`m just a pervert ! ;)

    December 11, 2011 at 12:59 am #54544
    Bear
    Participant

    sunny you are an artistic soul so keep the stories flowing!

    Any new writer is told first and foremost start with experiences you have had. It is the easiest method to pull memories and feeling together. So writing of friends and sharing those aspects of your imagination is the best way to proceed.

    Second advice  would be to pick up a thesaurus, (hard copy) a good way to learn new words… or to search for one that is perfect for what you are trying to describe. (A good tool for figuring out spelling too… though online word searches do help with some troublesome words the autocorrect doesn't pick up on.) I like a hard copy version, simply because it pulls me from my work on the screen,… and gives the inner eye of my imagination a chance to breath while I look for a word. Staring a work in progress tends to compound the creative blocks rather than help it.

    Your friend referencing this as “porn” is a rather silly comment,  The focus is sex,… duh… . Many great works of writing were referred to as porn simply because they contained suggestive material. Even a catagorzation of “erotica” is pretty loose base. Your style is more direct… in this matter suggests  more primitive,… with short raw descriptions. Whether that is what you were seeking when you wrote it is only what you can answer. 

    People might get hung up on grammar, spelling… they miss the point. The story itself.

    I urge you to keep writing and expressing yourself…

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