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  • November 7, 2012 at 3:05 am #6021
    Kingdustin
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    Eternal Darkness – part 1 –  Eternal Darkness

    We see the light
    We flee before the light
    For our world is made of Darkness
    Here we live, here we thrive
    The Darkness is our Home
    We see the dark and dark see us
    We move in the cold embrace of the Night
    We seek,we hide,we survive
    In the Everlasting darkness
    The light shines, the light fades
    Darkness obscure
    Darkness cannot be created
    Darkness cannot fade
    Darkness lives even in the brightest of light
    Darkness cannot be put out,we can only hide
    For we are the Darkness and we are here to stay
    Even when the light burns its brightest
    It will all ways fade
    But the Darkness will all ways remain
    For our world is made of Darkness
    Here we live, here we thrive
    Our home
    Eternal Darkness

    by Dustin Watkins

    November 7, 2012 at 4:24 am #76564
    Kingdustin
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    Please let me know what you guys think. Iv never shown any  of my work to other but my family. this is a First for me. I would honest opinions please.

    November 7, 2012 at 7:03 am #76565
    Brandybee
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    I like it and it is an interesting take on something that is part of our daily lives …    I read it first and thought of vampires and the underworld…  Then I read it again and thought of the undergrowth world of creepy crawlies ..

    I think every reader will picture something different maybe in their thoughts of Darkness and the clues you leave in your writings.

    I would certainly like to see more of your work.  Maybe post it under this topic in much the same way as  the fashion houses have.

    Well done, thank you for sharing it with us  :)

    November 7, 2012 at 9:37 am #76566
    Lydiarose
    Participant

    I love it, why you ask; I love the dark its when I come alive 

    November 7, 2012 at 9:45 am #76567
    Lover
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    Thanks for sharing your work. My opinion… I'm bit split. I personally don't like dark thoughts. But it's written from the view of the eternal darkness and it's written very well. So when I forget my own refusal of dark thoughts I can say: Congrats!
    As Brandy said I also like to see more of your work.

    If you like to share more of your poems you also can add the here: https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,748.30.html

    Thanks

    November 7, 2012 at 1:42 pm #76568
    Kingdustin
    Participant

    I'm super red right now. lol Thanks you all for your complements.

    Lover will it be all right if I repost this in the link you gave me?

    November 7, 2012 at 2:08 pm #76569
    Lover
    Participant

    Lover will it be all right if I repost this in the link you gave me?

    Of course :)

    November 7, 2012 at 5:22 pm #76570
    Kingdustin
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    I posted my Poem in the other spot with new info about it. please check it there

    https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,748.30.html

    November 8, 2012 at 7:18 pm #76571
    Kingdustin
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    Eternal Darkness – Part 2 – Lonely Light

    Born from the ashes
    I Burn with Light

    My light is Bright
    My light is Warm

    I shine deep into the night
    Illuminating all what I see
    I see them but they are hiding

    So I burn Brighter
    As to show my light and warmth
    But they hide even more
    Grip with sadness

    I burn even Brighter and longer
    To show them I am here
    But for all my effort
    They still hide

    Over the many years
    My Light has burned Long and Bright
    But never once did they say hi
    But now I feel weak

    My light is dimming
    My Warmth is cooling

    They are moving in as I grow weaker

    Why do they show themselves now

    Maybe I should try to say hi
    One more time before the end

    I dig deep with all my Strength
    Burn the brightest I ever could

    But they flee before me
    Why tease me so
    why do you not answer me

    As my light begins to fading
    I wonder why I was here
    Why was I born
    Why did you run why did you hide

    I just wish you could have said hi to me at least once
      for I am a Lonely Light

         Eternal Darkness

    By Dustin Watkins

    November 10, 2012 at 5:19 pm #76572
    Kingdustin
    Participant

    Heart of darkness

    Cold, Alone, afraid

    I am scared, my light is gone
    I have no voice

    What will be come of me
    Will I suffer for I could not reach them
    Will I sit in this cold Darkness alone

    What is this, they are all around me
    Why now, why are they so close to me
    When I have no voice to call out

    They're everywhere, so many
    I wish I could let them Know I am here
    With out my light,I have nothing

    I am but an empty shell In the Night

    Please hear me, I beg of thee
    Hear my heart, for my heart still shines
    Please hear me

    We hear you
    We see you

    What is this feeling
    Its warm and enlightening
    Who are you

    We are the Darkness

    Why are you here now
    I burned bright for you
    But all you did was Hide
    Why did you wait till now
    When my light is gone

    Your light is not gone
    Light never goes away
    Light merely fades but will always remain
    In The Heart of darkness

    For we the darkness are born from light

    You are not alone, we are the darkness

    For our world is made of Darkness
    Here we live, here we thrive
            Our home

        Eternal Darkness

              The End

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