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It's a well written story Cazzy as usual.
From a personal point of view, incest is not my thing and therefore spoils my enjoyment of it somewhat. I am also reading it & presuming that they are all consenting adults over 18. ( I know its 16 in the UK, but here it's 18 )
Grinning, its always interesting to see a story matter written that deals with taboo subjects and if it works … Are you testing the waters to see how it is received?
Would you or other authors then push further and begin to write of the nastier side of sex?
And as A Moderator do I allow it to go in that direction?
See what ” Can of worms” you have opened for me now?I guess , that I and the other Moderators will judge each on its merits … I would hope the talented authors would use their skills for the enjoyment of the Forum and be responsible role models for future authors and readers
As it's called part 1, do we get part2 soon?
I'm bit different at the moment. The story is well written and it's interesting to see the awakening of sexuality. This happens when you're not adult. You didn't mention an age, so we can pretend they are old enough when they have sex.
I'm also glad the sex happened between cousins. Don't like incest too.I think we can and should keep it as it is – it's marginal, but it's close to reality.
Cazzy, show us more of your writing talents and also share your ideas in other topics
I liked it but some parts are a bit confused to me.
Btw great story
Hello all, thanks you for your comments.
Brandy your points are very very perceptive. The story was actually a series that I wrote some years ago, and was my first ever attempt at erotic writing. I did put it on the forum very consciously to see what the reaction was compared to my later style that I have written much more recently.
I think I have proved to myself that the more current writing has improved (hopefully hehe.Like most people I do find incest somewhat off-putting, which wasn't my intention to really explore that side, but to explore sexual awakening in this little series. I purposefully omit ages of the people concerned but in truth the aim was for 18 year olds. The series jumps forward over several years, after part 1.
Thanks for being so perceptive Brandy honey
Love n huggies
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