Hope you don't mind Pafe, but I wanted to comment on your story and as you decided to lock it, realised you didn't wish for comments to break up your story.
I am enjoying your story girl, and am following it with interest. I think it may follow a path that is not my usual orientation but that matters not. I am glad that you decided to write your story and like that stories here will cater for all tastes, as the erotic story section should.
Thank you for sharing, it's well written and intriguing. Your efforts are appreciated very much.
I look forward to reading more.