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The lady Downstairs, A story about female domination, Chapter 1

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  • April 20, 2015 at 8:01 pm #147542
    Anonymous

      Very nice story Peter!
      Brandy will surely be requesting that you write one for her contest after she reads this. Hope you continue to write more of this and other stories.

      April 20, 2015 at 8:28 pm #147543
      Brandybee
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        Absolutely.

        Nice story peterkink.

        I have taken the liberty of spacing it out for easier reading. 

        I advise blocks of  approximately 5 to 6 lines and then spacing as it prevents people losing their place and helps our none native English speakers to translate more easily. 

        A useful tip is also start a new line every time a new person speaks. This makes it easier for the reader to establish who is talking. 

        … And just so you know,   ;D ;D ;D ;D  you have 10 days left to get a completed “Out of this World Contest” story to me by PM.   Deadline is  30 April 2015.

        Think you can do it?   

        Yeah of course you can, I have faith.

        Here's the details and rules.

        Forum Home Page > Announcements > Forum News  > EROTIC STORY CONTEST 9 – OUT OF THIS WORLD.
        https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,3565.0.html

        Forum Home Page > Organizations & Events > Contests > EROTIC STORY CONTEST RULES.
        https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2509.0.html

        Good Luck & Well Done on posting your first story in Forum :)

        April 22, 2015 at 6:10 pm #147544
        peterkink
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          Thanks for your kind words about my story. I have written a second chapter, which i think i will publish here too.
          However, I dont think I can produce something on the topic “Out of this world”. In my writing, as in my irl, I am strictly into femdom.

          April 22, 2015 at 6:23 pm #147545
          Brandybee
          Participant

            Easily solved  :)    Put it on Mars instead  of Earth :)

            Please do publish more in this topic.  We enjoy your story.

            FemDom huh?   I can do that,

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            YOU HAVE 7 DAYS TO GET A STORY TO ME STARTING TODAY BOY.  NOW GET CRACKING. DO  I  MAKE  MYSELF  CLEAR ?  

            ;D ;D ;D

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