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    JoeBoud
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    Rewriting – Part 1

    It’s been a long day, working round the house; cleaning out rooms, sorting between junk and keep, all the while, thinking of you.  Dinner is finished and in the oven, waiting for you to come home.

    Finally, I see the lights of your car hit the windows and a smile spreads across my face.  Looking around the room, all is set, I go outside to meet you and help you with your stuff.  I open your door and extend my hand to help you out.  I know you’ve been driving for a while and want nothing more than to get home.  You take my hand and I feel your soft warm glow.  Looking into your eyes, and watching your beautiful legs swing out of the car, I feel happy to have you here.  You shift out of the car and extend your graceful legs upright.  I wrap my arms around you and let you fall into my chest.  I holding you for a moment, as we melt into each other.  I feel your heart calm and we kiss to welcome each other back to where we belong, together.  I grab your stuff, take your arm and we walk into the house together.

    Your hand is soft, as I take your keys, and place them in the bowl.  I hold you for a moment, and slowly take your overcoat off you.  I let it linger off your arms for a moment then kiss you, before hanging it up in the hallway closet.

    I take your hand and we walk towards the kitchen.  Having you next to me, makes all seem right in the world.  I tell you to sit at the bar, while I get us a drink.  “What would you like?” You answer, “a little wine and some water”.  I tell you take your shoes off and relax, as I pour us a glass each of some cool red wine and get two bottles of water.  I put a glass of wine into you hand and open the bottle of water.  I scoot in next to you and we just let our exhaustion out as we look into each other’s eyes.  “Here’s to us at the end of a long day and the night only just begun.”   The glasses clink and we take a long sip of wine.

    #155482
    Brandybee
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    Hi JoeBoud,

    Welcome to Forum and the Erotic Story section. Nice intro and build up.  Cant wait to read the next episode.
    Keep the good work coming

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