HB, you are not alone in this, me too is searching for the right words, especially in a fantasy erotic story when I also have to get into the whole background of the whole thing.
I know….for peoples like us, who are not using english like main language, isn't so much easy!
Ok, time for map upgrade!
Libidinis map version 2.1.2
plus, a little work i did to take a look at the land around our city:
Outerland map version 1.0
Thinking about the neighbor kingdom whitout ocean side, i imagine mountains all near the ocean and the sea (brown and grey parts of the map): those can be natural limits of the kingdom it self. The grey area in the left top side of the map is where i start my story. Ready for a sea travell!
I have had too many things on my hands to also think about this story. 'The mystery', the contest and designing have absorbed a lot of time. I do still have material that would need a rewrite. It's a matter of starting it up again. The contests (as I hope to be able to organise one every 4 months) will be continous, as I hope this story will be too.
I am very curious about your new part Bear, might be just what we need to get inspired again