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@Hentai Have you read the Dragonlance chronicles? It started as a D&D campaign. So all those characters were shaped by the individuals playing them. Here it's quite similar, but rather then needing a DM we just respect each others boundries and hash things out here in the OOC thread before bringing them in story.
my bad, no. i know D&D only by name, never read something about it.
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i don't had read the story you wrote at the moment, but (damn all you!
) this make me wanna try something my self. so i start work on it tonight and hope to end the first part soon. i'll make you know how it goes!Well, Janine, really thank you. but before to jump in, i wanna try something my self for the first time and have your impression. then, when the background of this tale is clear to me, i can try to jump in!
well, for the moment, i'll make you know how the title i'll gonna use: ” A sisters' tale”! eh eh eh! :
@Lover I see a few similarities between our characters and I think it would be nice if they met somewhere in the story. Like your character, mine is unconsciously looking for fun, is doubting his reasons to continue his service for the brotherhood without really believing in their doctrine anymore. After he tasted the first delights of love making (not releasing pressure as a biological and physical necessity), he is doubting his voww of abstinence. I see your character as some sort of hermit. Having all the wisdom, people coming to him to find advice and guicdance, while he himself disconnects from life, though he might want something different. Maybe meeting the right girl would help him find the path back to true living? Just thinking outloud as well
@ Hentai I think it is wonderful that you want to jump in. Indeed it is a callenge to invent a city and surroundings lands with a group of writers, but we are fortunate enough to have people like Janine and Bear that have laid down wonderful storylines and backgrounds for this combined effort. In my believes,l the more people entering, the more alive the story will become.
As Umbra is not up to speed with the reasons for his mission, he might be either urged to continue at all costs if he finds out, or drop the mission, leave the brotherhood and become an outcast. But I think that will have to be seen as the story progresses. The internal fight his is fighting, is about his wish for love and attention, as he was deprived of that when he was brought up in the monastery..
@Bear: You made me thinking a lot about Tarot. Not sure if I do this but I see there has been a special way to use my ability. Thanks for your advice. You also made a good job when you summarized all characters.
@Tight: I'm sure we'll meet in the story
I'm not so familiar with the whole background, perhaps we can have something like a common past. Many decades ago, we have been one folk which splitted into two?well, bear…..as i said i'm working on a story who involve two elves (see title in one of my preview post). at the moment, i'm creating a first part to introduce them and there is no erotic moment, just some drammatic one, but in the future, i'll gonna add it. and yes, thinking of it i can add it to this tale……..but first i have to elaborate it a little! mmmmh, my mind is at work……and this can be reeeeeally a good thing!
anyway, i'll jump in only when i have the first chapter ready, cause i have a damn nice idea now!
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to give you a little idea on how the two sister will be, i add you here the old pic of them i had drawn some years ago.
honestly, is one of the jobs i like more, so I'm more than happy to see them in actionEdit:
Well, first chapter is now ready…….i have to read it again and then start to think on how i wanna use it: like a stand alone or linked it whit this tale.First big difference whit your works is i write it in third person. but i don't think it's a big problem, not at all.
btw, i'm still thinking about how to jump in whit one of this two char (probably the one whit the spear axe), but to do it, i think i have to add a second chapter. hope i can do it in the week end, so next week ican add it in the forum.btw, bear was curious about the char…well, here there is an anticipation:
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Phylia and Aily had grown in the ancient forest of Everious, a peaceful place for hundreds of years, where the elves have always lived in close contact with nature, protecting it from whoever has tried to destroy it. The giant tree of the forest has always give them a warm and comfortable place to live, providing them food and everything the elves needs. To show their gratitude, the elves had protect the ancient forest for generation, preventing anyone to cut trees indiscriminately, specially the humans, who use the wood to build their cities, ships and weapon for their war.As a child, despite her slight figure, Phylia has been shown to have significant force, which she has always put it at the service of her village and once she become an adult, she was given command of the Green Warden, the defender of the forest. Many elves wanted the honor of being chosen by her as companions for life, be able to caress her strong and vigorous body, but at the same time able to express an innate grace and femininity, but Phylia has always refused their avances …….. the only thing that was really important for her was to protect her village and her little sister.
Aily, unlike her sister, has always been a shy and timid girl, but if necessary has always demonstrated excellent control over the elements, specially the one of fire, a very rare thing for elves born in the Everious forest. Her long silver hair caressed by the wind and her white skin, had dreaming all the elves of the village but no one has ever managed to win her heart, her soft and sensual lips…..
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