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    Eidamir
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      I promised someone I would share this, so here I am.
      It's not finished yet, it's still a work in progress, but I think it's ready to be posted here.
      The words are originally writen in spanish, but I'm making a translation for this world.
      It is a song, it is MY song.
      It has been more than 10 years since the last time I wrote a song, but it was easier than I expected.
      Still need to be worked, but it is a nice start.

      Never wanted this to happen
      Never wanted to end like this
      It's so hard not knowing what we are
      It's so hard to find the truth

      Could you look me in the eyes?
      Could you look beyond?
      COuld you see what I feel?
      Could you see what I am?

      If you knew what you are to me
      If you saw mi tears.
      It's so hard not knowing what I am
      It's so hard to find the truth

      Could you look me in the eyes?
      Could you look beyond?
      COuld you see what I feel?
      Could you see what I am?

      I would never understand why is it like this
      I would never understand how to do it

      Could you look me in the eyes?
      Could you look beyond?
      COuld you see what I feel?
      Could you see what I am?
      Could you kill me again?
      Could you break the silence?
      Could you leave the torment?
      Could you see me again?

      Zoë, still fighting the darkness

      #159120
      Eidamir
      Participant

        Here I am again bringing you the almost final version of the lyric I told you about in my last post. This time I will post both the translated alongside with the original words.


        Never wanted this to happen | Nunca quise que esto pasara
        Never wanted to end like this | Nunca quise que terminara así
        It's so hard not knowing what we are | Es tan difícil no saber lo que somos
                                   It's so hard to find the truth | Es tan difícil descubrir la verdad

        Could you look me in the eyes | Podrías mirarme a los ojos
        Could you look beyond | Podrías ver más allá
        Could you see what I feel | Podías ver lo que siento
        Could you see who I am | Podrías ver quién soy yo

        If you only knew what you are to me | Si tan sólo suprieras lo que sos para mí
        If you only saw all mi tears | Si tan sólo vieras todas mis lágrimas
        It's so hard not knowing what I am | Es tan difícil no saber lo que soy
        It's so hard to find the truth | Es tan difícil descubrir la verdad

        Could you look me in the eyes | Podrías mirarme a los ojos
        Could you look beyond | Podrías ver más allá
        Could you see what I feel | Podías ver lo que siento
        Could you see what I am | Podrías ver lo que soy

        I would never understand why is it like this | Nunca entenderé por qué es así
        I would never understand how to do it | Nunca entenderé cómo hacerlo

        Could you look me in the eyes | Podrías mirarme a los ojos
        Could you look beyond | Podrías ver más allá
        Could you see what I feel | Podías ver lo que siento
        Could you see what you are | Podrías ver lo que sos
        Could you kill me again | Podrías matarme de nuevo
        Could you break the silence | Podrías romper el silencio
        Could you leave the torment | Podrías dejar el tormento
        Could you look at me again | Podrías mirarme otra vez
        Could you see who I am | Podrías ver quién soy yo
        Could you see what I am | Podrías ver lo que soy yo

        Zoë, walking out of the darkness
        #159121
        Eidamir
        Participant

          You were the first to see through my eyes
          You looked into my soul and saw the truth.
          The trouth that not even myself have really discovered yet.
          You gave me your time.
          You gave me your shoulder.
          You gave me countless words of cheer and advice.
          You helped me more than you can ever imagine.
          Now you're gone.
          I miss you.
          My mind is still a mess and I'm still trying to go out of the darkness.
          Sometimes I think I did it, but then, I see something, I hear something, I talk to someone and all that sadness is back.
          The tears are back.
          Will it ever end?
          A hug.
          A kiss.
          An ear.
          That is what I miss the most.
          Hope things are better there than they are in here.
          Hope to hear from you again someday.

          Zoë, always fighting the darkness

          #159122
          JessiCapri
          Participant

            Zoe?  Never stop writing.  Never stop fighting to come out of the darkness.  Come feel the sun on your skin.  Let it warm you.

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