I understand the problem with not being able to read the text all that well. I look at it on a laptop mainly, which emphasizes the problem, but on a desktop system with a larger monitor, it looks a lot better. Also, you can always use Ctrl+ in a browser to increase the size. However, without scrolling, I am restricted to the 750px width of the Achat forum.
Anyway, as I said, I have never studied the art of making comic strips and, on reflection, there are other aspects I could possibly have done differently, like no balloons, upper case text, etc. but then it wouldn't be my cartoon strip
As long as you still laugh at the end of each of them, that's good enough for me
there are different way to assemble comic panel ansd yours are simple, so it all depend on your personal taste: all on a orizzontal or vertical line is the easy solution, this one is a bit more elaborate, but the panel are not bigger from before or this is how it look to me (am i wrong!?)…and have to say, i think you can modify this scheme a little to give a partial idea of a “panel chain” putting the right low corner of the first under the left upper corner of the second one, etcetera
Wow these are great Concerto.I just started reading them this morning,and I'm really loving your clips.Please continue with these,they're amazing and hilarious