Poem – Eternal Darkness – by KingDustin

[Kingdustin]

Please let me know what you guys think. Iv never shown any  of my work to other but my family. this is a First for me. I would honest opinions please.

[Brandybee]

I like it and it is an interesting take on something that is part of our daily lives …    I read it first and thought of vampires and the underworld…  Then I read it again and thought of the undergrowth world of creepy crawlies ..

I think every reader will picture something different maybe in their thoughts of Darkness and the clues you leave in your writings.

I would certainly like to see more of your work.  Maybe post it under this topic in much the same way as  the fashion houses have.

Well done, thank you for sharing it with us 

[Lydiarose]

I love it, why you ask; I love the dark its when I come alive 

[Lover]

Thanks for sharing your work. My opinion… I'm bit split. I personally don't like dark thoughts. But it's written from the view of the eternal darkness and it's written very well. So when I forget my own refusal of dark thoughts I can say: Congrats!
As Brandy said I also like to see more of your work.

If you like to share more of your poems you also can add the here: https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,748.30.html

Thanks

[Kingdustin]

I'm super red right now. lol Thanks you all for your complements.

Lover will it be all right if I repost this in the link you gave me?

[Lover]

Lover will it be all right if I repost this in the link you gave me?

Of course

[Kingdustin]

I posted my Poem in the other spot with new info about it. please check it there

https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,748.30.html

[Kingdustin]

Eternal Darkness – Part 2 – Lonely Light

Born from the ashes
I Burn with Light

My light is Bright
My light is Warm

I shine deep into the night
Illuminating all what I see
I see them but they are hiding

So I burn Brighter
As to show my light and warmth
But they hide even more
Grip with sadness

I burn even Brighter and longer
To show them I am here
But for all my effort
They still hide

Over the many years
My Light has burned Long and Bright
But never once did they say hi
But now I feel weak

My light is dimming
My Warmth is cooling

They are moving in as I grow weaker

Why do they show themselves now

Maybe I should try to say hi
One more time before the end

I dig deep with all my Strength
Burn the brightest I ever could

But they flee before me
Why tease me so
why do you not answer me

As my light begins to fading
I wonder why I was here
Why was I born
Why did you run why did you hide

I just wish you could have said hi to me at least once
  for I am a Lonely Light

     Eternal Darkness

By Dustin Watkins

[Kingdustin]

Heart of darkness

Cold, Alone, afraid

I am scared, my light is gone
I have no voice

What will be come of me
Will I suffer for I could not reach them
Will I sit in this cold Darkness alone

What is this, they are all around me
Why now, why are they so close to me
When I have no voice to call out

They're everywhere, so many
I wish I could let them Know I am here
With out my light,I have nothing

I am but an empty shell In the Night

Please hear me, I beg of thee
Hear my heart, for my heart still shines
Please hear me

We hear you
We see you

What is this feeling
Its warm and enlightening
Who are you

We are the Darkness

Why are you here now
I burned bright for you
But all you did was Hide
Why did you wait till now
When my light is gone

Your light is not gone
Light never goes away
Light merely fades but will always remain
In The Heart of darkness

For we the darkness are born from light

You are not alone, we are the darkness

For our world is made of Darkness
Here we live, here we thrive
        Our home

    Eternal Darkness

          The End

[Author]

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