Poems, where everyone can leave their scribbles, haiku’s, poetry, etc.

[Kingdustin]

Here is my First public tell of my work, I truly hope you all enjoy it.

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We see the light
We flee before the light

For our world is made of Darkness
Here we live, here we thrive
The Darkness is our Home

We see the dark and dark see us
We move in the cold embrace of the Night
We seek,we hide,we survive
In the Everlasting darkness

The light shines, the light fades
     
Darkness obscure
Darkness cannot be created
Darkness never fades
Darkness lives even in the brightest of light
Darkness cannot be put out,it can only hide

For we are the Darkness and we are here to stay
Even when the light burns it brightest
It will all ways fade
But the Darkness will all ways remain

For our world is made of Darkness
Here we live, here we thrive
           Our home

      Eternal Darkness
      By Dustin Watkins

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This is part one of three. part two will be out soon I'm make a final look over it.
please let me know what you guys really think. honesty please, if you think is crap, say it and please tell me why. If you think is Good also please tell my why.

[Kingdustin]

I have finish Part 2 and 3. I will post them both If there is any more who are interested in seeing  my work.

[hentaiboy69]

King, do it, please! i'm sure lot of us want to read them!

[Brandybee]

Count me in. I like reading people's creative writings

Enjoyed what you have done so far

[Kingdustin]

thanks Brandy , hentaiboy. here is part two

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Lonely Light

Born from the ashes
I Burn with Light

My light is Bright
My light is Warm

I shine deep into the night
Illuminating all what I see
I see them but they are hiding

So I burn Brighter
As to show my light and warmth
But they hide even more
Grip with sadness

I burn even Brighter and longer
To show them I am here
But for all my effort
They still hide

Over the many years
My Light has burned Long and Bright
But never once did they say hi
But now I feel weak

My light is dimming
My Warmth is cooling

They are moving in as I grow weaker

Why do they show themselves now

Maybe I should try to say hi
One more time before the end

I dig deep with all my Strength
Burn the brightest I ever could

But they flee before me
Why tease me so
why do you not answer me

As my light begins to fading
I wonder why I was here
Why was I born
Why did you run why did you hide

I just wish you could have said hi to me at least once
for I am a  Lonely Light here in

     Eternal Darkness

by Dustin Watkins

[Lover]

Veryy nice Dustin

[Kingdustin]

hmmm…the lack of comments to my poem is little sad …..lol jk  for those who have read it, if you don't mind could let me know what you think. be good or bad. If your find you can't post in for any reason Pm me your thoughts.

Ps. thanks lover..did you like part 2 better then part 1?

[Lover]

Yes.
I also liked the way you wrote part 1, it's just personal taste about the content, the dark mood of it.

[Brandybee]

Don't be sad,  sometimes, people cant read it right away or you provoke thoughts they need to put into words.

It is a lovely poem and like Lover, I do find it dark and a little sad but I think that is what you meant to do and it worked.

I like it, I like things where each reader can interpret it in their own way and not necessarily the same way as other readers or even the author himself.

Please, I would like to read more of  your work.  And, maybe presumptious of me, but also an entry for the next erotic story contest  :

[Kingdustin]

Brandy I'm not sad it was joke. JK mean joking lol but thank you for your concern

anyway thank you for your thoughts Brandy lover.
If you can please pass the word around to others. I have them posted here and in the off topic section.
Thanks you very much.

as to the erotic stories I don't think i will partake in them. as writing erotic story in not style. but I will give few tries and see if i can make something I feel all right submitting. No promises ok

thamks again. please anyone who read my poem please leave a comment thank you.

[islandsun]

@ Dustin keep going great , I `ve no sense in spelling me does`t stop me ! And welcome , will myself be posting soon.
> Smile good work  ty xxx Sunny

[Kingdustin]

Thank you sunny. glad you like it.

[Kingdustin]

Well here is part 3, thanks for wait I hope you enjoy my poems.

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Heart of darkness

Cold, Alone, afraid

I am scared, my light is gone
I have no voice

What will be come of me
Will I suffer for I could not reach them
Will I sit in this cold Darkness alone

What is this, they are all around me
Why now, why are they so close to me
When I have no voice to call out

They're everywhere, so many
I wish I could let them Know I am here
With out my light,I have nothing

I am but an empty shell In the Night

Please hear me, I beg of thee
Hear my heart, for my heart still shines
Please hear me

We hear you
We see you

What is this feeling
Its warm and enlightening
Who are you

We are the Darkness

Why are you here now
I burned bright for you
But all you did was Hide
Why did you wait till now
When my light is gone

Your light is not gone
Light never goes away
Light merely fades but will always remain
In The Heart of darkness

For we the darkness are born from light

You are not alone, we are the darkness

For our world is made of Darkness
Here we live, here we thrive
        Our home

    Eternal Darkness
       
        The End

[Lover]

You Make It

If there is something I can do for you,
I make it.

If there are dark hours to walk through,
We make it.

Is it the new day that makes me smile?
No, you make it.

Are the stars building a bridge?
No, you make it.

Does the sun shine brighter for me?
No, you make it.

If the walls have to be torn down,
We make it.

If a new wall must be built,
We make it.

If you have a bad day –  at the end of the day
You make it.

If we need hope and faith and love,
We make it.

If you need to face a fear,
You make it.

If there is a next step to do and go on,
You make it.

Just close your eyes and I will be there
Just make it

[Momma_andrea]

“Time and Time”

Time and time
my dreams fly by
intentions fall to the floor
Goals unreached
the courage has gone
Flown straight out the door

Time and time
I'm back again
standing at the drawing board
plans anew
the fight has returned
strength in me reborn

Time and time
I try again
me pushing against the gale
don't let go
my spirit shouts and
I will never fail

[Author]

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