Shower Toys – Hot encounter with the Cableman

[Brandybee]

Hello Jack5912 , 

Welcome to Forum and Thank you for posting your first story here.  It is a hot little story and my pleasure to read.   
I'm sure our other forum villagers will enjoy it too.  It's a great story.

I hope you don't  mind, I have spaced it out for easier reading for me and our none English native readers. It is easier to translate and not to lose your place in reading. I usually recommend blocks  of 5 or 6 lines before spacing and a new paragraph and space for every speaker. As you can see it presents much better on the page.

I would like you to consider entering in our next Erotic Story Contest 8. We are discussing themes at the moment.

Please let us know your suggestions.

Forum Home Page > Organizations & Events > Contests  > EROTIC STORY CONTEST 8 – O.T.                            https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,3231.0.html                                                                                                                                                                                                                           

I would also encourage you to read the current Erotic Story Contest 7 stories and vote for your favourite.

It shows support for our authors and little contest.

Forum Home Page > Organizations & Events > Contests > ” JOURNEY ” THE STORIES. EROTIC STORY CONTEST 7.        https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,3232.0.html

I really Hope to read more from you.

Here's the Erotic story Contest rules for you to look over.

Forum Home Page > Organizations & Events > Contests  > EROTIC STORY CONTEST RULES. https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2509.0.html

Please introduce yourself to the rest of the Forum Village

Forum Homepage / Organisations & Events / Introduce yourself
https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/board,22.0.html 

[Jack5912]

Hi Brandie, Thanks for the nice compliments and no, I don't mind you re-arranging things a bit to make them easier to read.  I might be interested in the contest, but have not been spending much time here lately.  But glad you let me know about it; I may enter something and will try to check in more often.

Jack

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