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  • in reply to: A night at the Adult Bookstore! #154922
    Brandybee
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    I particularly like your use of past tense in this one and I think the extra spacing works well in presenting your story and enabling for easy reading for our members. Well done.

    As I have said before :)

    Consider yourself recruited for the next Erotic Story Contest.

    I hope you seriously consider entering our next Erotic Story Contest 13.
    At the moment we are voting on the theme. Here's where:

    Forum Home Page > Organizations & Events > Contests > Erotic Story Contest 13. OT
    https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,4435.0.html

    Here are the rules to our Erotic Story Contests.

    Forum Home Page > Organizations & Events > Contests > EROTIC STORY CONTEST RULES.
    https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2509.0.html

    I hope you do & hope to read more of you soon.

    in reply to: A weekend of sharing! #158392
    Brandybee
    Participant

    — continued..  I hope soon.  I want more!

    Consider yourself recruited for the next Erotic Story Contest.

    I hope you seriously consider entering our next Erotic Story Contest 13.
    At the moment we are voting on the theme. Here's where:

    Forum Home Page > Organizations & Events > Contests > Erotic Story Contest 13. OT
    https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,4435.0.html

    Here are the rules to our Erotic Story Contests.

    Forum Home Page > Organizations & Events > Contests > EROTIC STORY CONTEST RULES.
    https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2509.0.html

    I hope you do & hope to read more of you soon.

    in reply to: Name without a face #159753
    Brandybee
    Participant

    Phew.

    Consider yourself recruited for the next Erotic Story Contest.

    I hope you seriously consider entering our next Erotic Story Contest 13.
    At the moment we are voting on the theme. Here's where:

    Forum Home Page > Organizations & Events > Contests > Erotic Story Contest 13. OT
    https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,4435.0.html

    Here are the rules to our Erotic Story Contests.

    Forum Home Page > Organizations & Events > Contests > EROTIC STORY CONTEST RULES.
    https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2509.0.html

    I hope you do & hope to read more of you soon.

    in reply to: My Love #159648
    Brandybee
    Participant

    Hi DarkSpeider,

    Welcome to Forum.

    Your tribute to Tangoracer is very nice. He is well known here.

    As a first attempt at writing, it is encouraging that you have taken the plunge and have written in a second language. 

    I have taken the liberty of splitting it into paragraphs so our non English members and regular readers can read it more easily and not lose their place. I usually recommend to aim for a block  of around 5 to 6 lines  but this varies  on how it fits into your story.

    I hope you consider entering our next Erotic Story Contest.
    At the moment we are voting on the theme. Here's where:

    Forum Home Page > Organizations & Events > Contests > Erotic Story Contest 13. OT
    https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,4435.0.html

    Well done, I look forward to reading your next episodes of “My Love.”

    in reply to: Erotic Story Contest 12. O.T. #156993
    Brandybee
    Participant

    GOOD NEWS

    Achat agreed to up the prizes and Submission Rewards.

    The Prizes for contest 12  reflect the new decision.  THANK YOU ACHAT GODS

    PRIZES          STORY                Author            POINTS

    1. A$12,000 1- Infatuation  –     Lady_Andrea       1,070  
    2. A$8,000 6-The Hot Winter Night – Misdevious      900
    3. A$5,000 9 – Big Ruby’s Wager –   JayC               865

    There will be two extra Consolation Prizes of A$1,500 for 4th place and 
    A$1,200 for Last Place.
    The submission reward of  A$600 will also be increased to A$1,000 to each of the contestants who are not in the top 3 or in receipt of a consolation prize.

    PRIZES             STORY                                              AUTHOR            POINTS

    4A$1,500  3 – Office Discipline –                                  Brandybee            840
    5. A$ 1,000  2 –  Hide & Prejudice –                                 Honeybatcher        760
    6. A$ 1,000  4 –  A Cuckold at Crystal Lake –                     Vaughan               665
    7. A$ 1,000  8 – Hot Wife –                                            miahotcat             660
    8. A$ 1,000  7  – Camille’s  Journal –                               Cloe1011               645
    9A$ 1,200 5 – The Breaking in of a Pleasure Slave Girl –  GsCougar              575

    Pythia – the Forum Bank Account has paid out all the above prizes.
    The Independent Judges and Poster Creator have also received a gift of A$500 each as a Thank you for taking part in the Judging process and winner announcements.

    Well Done Everyone,
    Enjoy your prizes & rewards.

    in reply to: Collars and Pet Necklaces #43565
    Brandybee
    Participant

    Achat has replied.


    Sorry for the late reply. We're working very hard on new backend server platform because the old one gets slower and slower. It will be released in the coming days.
    Again sorry for the delays.
    After release of the new backend, we'll get back to the “user created content” subject, making things quicker and more effective.

    Hopefully once the “backend” is sorted, this will be a priority on their agenda.

    in reply to: Forum Game: The next one posting…. #122426
    Brandybee
    Participant

    [img]https://tse2.explicit.bing.net/th?id=OIP.Ma90a491319a69a302cb646ca70d37f8ao0&pid=Api[/img]

    Well I'm drooling anyway.

    Next to post is an Achat story  contestant….

    in reply to: I ask the A-Team #141400
    Brandybee
    Participant

    I've reported it to Achat for you but please  could you send a report through  “Support” above ( On top line with shop forum etc… ) to Achat as well.

    Hopefully we will have you back with us soon.

    in reply to: Collars and Pet Necklaces #43564
    Brandybee
    Participant

    I have sent the below message to Achat asking for collars too.
    The Moderators will keep trying and asking.

    Hi Achat Gods,

    I'm not sure if you have seen the below but there is a growing number of dis-satisfied customers.

    Are you able to make collars? If so can you make it a priority?
    I am aware that members have forwarded collars as examples via “Support” after  your Administrator told them too.

    If you cant, then please post the problem.. maybe one of the designer members can help?

    Are you aware some members are very good designers?

    Please make the next upgrade a selection of collars…  6 years is a long time to be waiting  AND they will sell hot off the shelf.

    Thanks

    in reply to: Erotic Story Contest 12. O.T. #156982
    Brandybee
    Participant
    WINNERS POSTER BY THE TALENTED    MARTINUS
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    Achat has been notified and prizes & submission awards will be awarded to accounts as soon as practicable.
    Thank you and well done to the winners & all who took part.

    in reply to: Erotic Story Contest 12. O.T. #156981
    Brandybee
    Participant

    The JUDGES Results  listed  2 to 30.
    32 is the PUBLIC JUDGE  (Decided from the public vote)

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    The Judges have been given a number by the Contest Manager when they submitted their ranking list for the stories.
    It corresponds to the number above.
    They will remain anonymous in public unless they wish to identify themselves in this Erotic Story Contest 12. O.T. Topic here.

    ( Forum Home Page > Organizations & Events > Contests > Erotic Story Contest 12. O.T.
    https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,4235.45.html )

    Some of the Judges who may post and are willing to be identified, are also willing to give feedback by Forum PM (Private Messaging), if authors should request it. Feedback will not be posted in public.

    Thank you each & everyone sincerely for your help in this judging process. Without you, this contest would not have been successful.
    Thank you.  Thank you. Thank you.

    Brandybee
    Participant
    WINNERS POSTER BY THE TALENTED    MARTINUS
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    Achat has been notified and prizes & submission awards will be awarded to accounts as soon as practicable.
    Thank you and well done to the winners & all who took part.
    Brandybee
    Participant

    The JUDGES Results  listed  2 to 30.
    32 is the PUBLIC JUDGE  (Decided from the public vote)

    rWB91J2.jpg

    The Judges have been given a number by the Contest Manager when they submitted their ranking list for the stories.
    It corresponds to the number above.
    They will remain anonymous in public unless they wish to identify themselves in the Erotic Story Contest 12. O.T. Topic. See below for directions:

    Forum Home Page > Organizations & Events > Contests > Erotic Story Contest 12. O.T.
    https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,4235.45.html

    Some of the Judges who may post and are willing to be identified, are also willing to give feedback by Forum PM (Private Messaging), if authors should request it. Feedback will not be posted in public.

    Thank you each & everyone sincerely for your help in this judging process. Without you, this contest would not have been successful.
    Thank you.  Thank you. Thank you.

    in reply to: Erotic Story Contest 12. O.T. #156980
    Brandybee
    Participant

    The Public vote has now closed and will determine the outcome of the PUBLIC JUDGE SCORING.

    Result of Public vote.  70 votes were cast.

    1.  Infatuation. – 18 
    2.  Hide & Prejudice. – 15
    3.  Office Discipline. – 10
    4.  A Cuckold at Crystal Lake. – 5
    5.  The Breaking in of a Pleasure Slave Girl. – 6
    6.  The Hot Winter Night. – 13
    7.  Camille’s Journal. – 3
    8.  Hot wife. – 8 
    9.  Big Ruby’s Wager. – 6


    1.  1.  Infatuation. – 18 votes –                                    =  45
    2.  2.  Hide & Prejudice.  – 15 votes –                              =  40
    3.  6.  The Hot Winter Night. – 13 votes                          =  35
    4.  3.  Office Discipline. – 10 votes                                =  30
    5.  8.  Hot wife. – 8  votes                                            =  25
    6.  5.  The Breaking in of a Pleasure Slave Girl.  – 6 votes    = 20
    6.  9.  Big Ruby’s Wager. – 6 votes                                  =  20
    8.  4.  A Cuckold at Crystal Lake. – 5 votes                      =  10
    9.  7.  Camille’s Journal. – 3 votes                                  =    5

    This will be added to the other Judges scores and the winners  announced  ASAP.

    Thank you to all the writers for taking part, all the judges for forwarding me their ranking lists and to all the Forum members who took the time to read and vote.

    Good Luck to all the contestants.

    in reply to: Obituary Thread. RIP. #153428
    Brandybee
    Participant
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    RIP Carrie Fisher
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