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The Public vote was closed on the deadline yesterday and will determine the outcome of the PUBLIC JUDGE SCORING.
Result of Public vote. 58 votes were cast.
The Story. Votes Postion Points.
1. The Invitation. 10 (2) 50
2. A Wolves Sweet Butt. 8 (3) 45
3. Hangover Remedy. 7 (4) 40
4. Take Five. 2 (7) 25
5. The Anniversary Gift. 2 (7) 25
6. A Night With Two Friends 11 (1) 55
7. Cab-Ride. 1 (10) 10
8. Tormented. (Free Verse) 1 (10) 10
9. Deflowered Rosa. 7 (4) 40
10. Her Birthday Treat. 7 (4) 40
11. The Farmer's Dream. 2 (7) 25Total Voters: 58
Points are awarded thus :
1st place = 55 points ; 2 = 50 ; 3 = 45 ; 4 = 40 ; 5 = 35 ; 6 = 30 ; 7 = 25 ; 8 = 20 ; 9 = 15 ; 10 = 10 ; 11= 5.
This will be added to the other Judges scores and the winners announced ASAP.
Thank you to all the writers for taking part, all the judges for forwarding me their ranking lists and to all the Forum members who took the time to read and vote.
Good Luck to all the contestants.
BrandybeeParticipantThe Public vote was closed on the deadline yesterday and will determine the outcome of the PUBLIC JUDGE SCORING.
Result of Public vote. 58 votes were cast.
The Story. Votes Postion Points.
1. The Invitation. 10 (2) 50
2. A Wolves Sweet Butt. 8 (3) 45
3. Hangover Remedy. 7 (4) 40
4. Take Five. 2 (7) 25
5. The Anniversary Gift. 2 (7) 25
6. A Night With Two Friends 11 (1) 55
7. Cab-Ride. 1 (10) 10
8. Tormented. (Free Verse) 1 (10) 10
9. Deflowered Rosa. 7 (4) 40
10. Her Birthday Treat. 7 (4) 40
11. The Farmer's Dream. 2 (7) 25Total Voters: 58
Points are awarded thus :
1st place = 55 points ; 2 = 50 ; 3 = 45 ; 4 = 40 ; 5 = 35 ; 6 = 30 ; 7 = 25 ; 8 = 20 ; 9 = 15 ; 10 = 10 ; 11= 5.
This will be added to the other Judges scores and the winners announced ASAP.
Thank you to all the writers for taking part, all the judges for forwarding me their ranking lists and to all the Forum members who took the time to read and vote.
Good Luck to all the contestants.
BrandybeeParticipantWe are nearing the end of the voting process for the Erotic story contest 13 – Group SEX.
I have some more Judges results in and as you can see, it’s anyone's race. They are all good stories and the points are quite close.
To those who haven't voted yet, please do.
To those Judges who have not yet listed their story preference 1 to 11 please do so. Deadline is TODAY –
FRIDAY 30 June 2017 in just over 7 hours time. I'd obviously like them ASAP. 1 listed is your favourite ; 2 is your second favourite, right down to 11 = least favourite of the 10 stories & 1 poem.To those Author Judges who have not as yet sent their list in, it is worth 40 points for your story, so don’t miss out.
And a Big THANK YOU to Everyone, Reading, Voting and Judging.
SCORING 3rd quarter . Deadline 30 June 2017. 7pm (UK TIME)
STORY POINTS
1. 3. Hangover Remedy 800
2. 6. A Night With Two Friends 730
3. 1. The Invitation 725
3. 2. A Wolves Sweet Butt 725
5. 10. Her Birthday Treat 620
6. 9. Deflowered Rosa 615
7. 5. The Anniversary Gift 610
8. 11. The Farmers Dream 585
9. 7. Cab-Ride 550
10. 4. Take Five 535
11. 8. Tormented 490Here's the link to Erotic Story Contest 13 – Group Sex THE STORIES.
Achat Forum > Organizations & Events > Contests > “Group Sex” THE STORIES. Erotic Story Contest 13
https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,4692.0.htmlBrandybeeParticipant2. LaidBackJim – Brandybee
I was in the Achat Bar & Grill when I saw a good looking guy walk in that I recognised. It was someone I knew very well, LaidBackJim.
He bought a couple of drinks and sauntered over to me.
His blue eyes twinkled as he greeted me in his deep sexy Aussie accent and gave me one of the drinks. I smiled back, kissed him on the cheek and thanked him. He knew exactly what I would have ordered.He sat down at my table and we chatted and teased each other. He was my date for the evening and I had the choice of a sexy macho dance or a sensual and intimate foot massage.
His blue eyes waited questioningly as I pondered the choice. I imagined him in my mind’s eye – seeing his muscular sexy body prancing around for me in a green mankini or a strong, naked, sexy alpha male at my feet. Mmmm – that’s a very nice dilemma for a woman.
I let him sweat a bit as we drank our wine and spoke about our busy days.He told me he had bought a yacht which had quite an interesting name. My face broke out in a smile when he told me but then again, he explained – He told me she was elegant and sleek and had a powerful thrust.
“I ride her as much as I can,” he told me. “The only trouble is I flood her.”
“You must enjoy her very much,” I commented thoughtfully.
“I love to open her up,” He grinned, “Want to see?”It’s not every day, I get invited to a yacht so I readily agreed buying another bottle of red wine from the bar on the way out the door.
A short time later, he was showing me around the luxurious vessel as we drank wine.“Very impressive,” I told him.
“Yes, she is.” He was in full charm and I was wallowing in it.I told him, I had decided on a foot massage and before I knew it, I was whisked to the sofa, with luxurious oils, pumices, and special little foot massage tools that included little balls and ones that looked like dumb bells and multi-legged aliens with bulbous feet.
[img width=300]https://results.searchlock.com/image.php?encI=X55g%3ADDiii.%2FWBs.JvVDJN%3FKOPEHzbATbzGEIAEZ_AAebAbAtIeTThpZhT%26eKIPzFbHEeTIItApZzp_z-_HEZeIIAAeZbhe%26N4Pz%26XPeF40-BtJ-6W%2F_7+u+yQN8z-q8b080KoJI4ajhmTQxAw%26mPz%26NPX55g%25F1%25GQ%25GQW.f%2F1qWVs.JvV%25GQWV1sf9%25GQW%25GQGZzzATTAZtbbcbcz%25GQ9cazbbb.%3Dgs%26gPIfm-Y%2CHzzb.z[/img]Jim meticulously massaged my feet with sandalwood essential oils. His strong, manly fingers worked their magic from my heel to my toes then back again and up to my knees. I sighed in deep contentment.
My sense of smell was pleasantly assailed with the sandalwood essential oils;
my sense of touch was rewarded by the relaxing and soothing massage on my feet and legs;
my sense of sight was indulged by the handsome man kneeling before me;
my sense of hearing was spoiled by the gentle twang of his sexy Aussie voice mixed with the sea lapping the hull and
my sense of taste was cossetted by the promise of a kiss.All in all, LaidbackJim made my time on “The Brandy” very memorable.
Before we knew it, time was getting real late and time for bed … again.
Sighs wickedly…. Just so everyone knows, he is a terrible date and one to avoid at all costs.
BrandybeeParticipantThank you Cunda619 & BillyBlueeye for letting us know the result of your experiences.
Its always nice to know how and when a problem is resolved to let our other members know.
BrandybeeParticipantI have asked Achat if Public Sex can be returned to Night – Achat's Red Light Destrict. It does seem strange that of all places, it was removed from this room.
Personally, I think the facility should be available in all the rooms & leave it to the members whether they choose to take part in the thrill of going public.
I'll let you know when I get an answer.
BrandybeeParticipantHi Duki,
I have not heard of this issue before. I have forwarded your complaint to Achat to look into the issue.
Please let us know when you get an answer or result.
Thank you and good luck.
BrandybeeParticipantHi Davina,
You certainly do not need to purchase 3 uploads.
1 pic upload of 99A$ should suffice and work.
There has been similar issues experienced by other members.
I have forwarded your complaint to Achat.
When you get an answer will you let us know here too.
Thank you and Good luck.
BrandybeeParticipantDid you allow Achat access through your Firewall – your own Security & Windows Firewall ?
Windows kicks in automatically when you turn your own off and can delete some upgrades immediately once installed as malware (malicious software)You will have to uninstall everything to do with Achat and install everything again, just to make sure.
Good look, let us know how you get on.
BrandybeeParticipantThank you Anatasia97. I hope you seriously consider entering the next one.
Just a REMINDER. 2 DAYS LEFT TO VOTEVote for a theme for Erotic Story Contest 13. Voting ends Fri 30 June 2017.Thank you all for your ideas. They are Fantastic. I have mixed and matched some so in all there is 10 for the Forum Village to vote on.
Please vote for your favourite.Here are the themes for you to vote on and be inspired for Erotic Story Contest 14.
Voting for the Theme ends Friday 30 June 2017 & The Erotic Story Contest 14 will be open for submissions from Saturday 1 July 2017 until Saturday 30 Sept 2017.1. Naughty Toys or Adapted Sex Toy
An erotic story that involves a sex toy or a thing adapted to give sexual pleasure. It could be a sexy device, a dildo, vibrator, a robot, a Symbian, handcuffs or blind folds. Tell us your naughty story.2. Mile High.
An erotic story at least a mile above ground or higher. A story that involves fun in an aeroplane, a hot air balloon, a rocket or a spaceship. Tell us your naughty sexy thoughts.3. Holiday
An erotic story which involves a break from the crud of your real life. Maybe a romantic break for 2 or more; a honeymoon couple ; a break a way when you meet and fall in lust or love. What happens in ____ stays in _____… Does this one whet your writing appetite?4. Caught… or not.
An erotic story where you nearly get caught or caught in the act. Maybe a hot encounter in a public space where the thrill of getting caught is there ; Maybe the couple get caught, by someone – a partner, police, someone in authority. The story could be the act of being caught or nearly caught, the consequences of being caught – a threesome, blackmail, humiliation… this could be your thrilling moment.5. Every picture tells a story.
Send me – the Contest Manager – a pic by PM over a seven day period. The story will be numbered and then a random number pulled out the hat. That numbered picture will be the subject of your erotic story.6. Good v Evil.
A Super hero story; an angel and devil story ; cops & robbers ; spies and terrorists. The story has to be erotic with good and evil adversaries.7. Prejudice
This is where you have rightly or wrongly judged a person for their colour; class ; politics ; religion etc… and it turns to lust or love. It could be your dirty little secret – someone you wouldn't be seen in public with but the sex is great, mind blowing and will make a hot story to tell.8. Fast and furious
Exactly what is says on the tin. An erotic story involving speed and a sexy encounter – in a car, on a train or maybe it’s the sex act where you just rip each other’s clothes off!9. Long distance lovers
This hot story could involve phone sex ; internet sex ; sexting or even a surprise visit.10. Food
An erotic food story. In your sexy play use : chocolate sauce, cucumbers, whipped cream, ice cream, ice cubes mmm.Please Vote. I look forward to seeing the eventual theme winner.
Thank you again to all those who made suggestions.BrandybeeParticipantCOUNTDOWN IS ON2 DAYS for voting and judging DEADLINE.Please READ & VOTE for your favourite GROUP SEX story. Story JUDGES, please may I have your preference list ASAPThe Deadline for voting & Judging is Friday 30 JUNE 2017 – (7pm UK Time)HURRY HURRY HURRY[img width=380]https://results.searchlock.com/image.php?encI=X55g%3ADDiii.%2FWBs.JvVDJN%3FKOPIeFpeIAGAtTzEGtZh-ztZzeztIebGFhb%26eKIPbZppTZzzTEITZGeGFTFZTeA_THIzZF-z%26N4Pz%26XP2YmgNuC1SCzu54QxSEbeTR%3DViCl-_INX%3DToViwFzT5U%26mPz%26NPX55g%25F1%25GQ%25GQQ5vg.N3%25GQWV1sf9%25GQGbzGzG%25GQQ5vg.N3oEEETT.%3Dgs%26gPIfm-Y%2CHGTG.z[/img] [img width=170]https://results.searchlock.com/image.php?encI=X55g%3ADDiii.%2FWBs.JvVDJN%3FKOPEeEh-IZAhHAhE-eFtAT-AAZb-bH-Tpze%26eKIPzHHHhHIeb-eeZ-e-FpETh_EGb_epZ_ee%26N4Pz%26XPm4-FLkeqt+EcZHrW67pR-vq%3D4H9fsc+2Ol8WquYGWfE%26mPz%26NPX55g%25F1%25GQ%25GQQ1g.5v%25GQWV1sf9%25GQET%25GQGbGtZEHHbT%25GQs1qcgvNB%25GQ0v5clfBcl1953N%2F15WBscOK_9cG.sWQ%26gPIfm-Y%2CHbAb.z[/img]Those Naughty Erotic Story Contest!! Yes! Yes! Yes!
Here are the EROTIC STORIES to read and judge :Achat Forum > Organizations & Events > Contests > “Group Sex” THE STORIES. Erotic Story Contest 13
https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,4692.0.htmlBrandybeeParticipant24. Brandybee – Bearded_man
I was meandering around the Achat City when I saw Bearded_man. I waved and ran over to greet him. I had met him before briefly and I was pleased to see him again.
“We won each other in the Date Game,” I told him and cheekily asked, “Would you like your Lap Dance now?”
Luckily it was perfect timing. He was free too so I invited back to my Loft House.
Once inside, to get us both settled, I offered him a choice of wines and he chose a Red Chardonay.
We drank, danced and chatted until it was time for my Lap Dance.I chose the music & turned it on. I provocatively removed some clothing but kept some on to save my blushes.
Chris Isaak – Baby Did A Bad Bad Thing [Uncensored] https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=abzK_jZdKFw
Luckily, Bearded_Man liked the tune and I began to swing to the beat, moving my hips, pouting my lips, looking at him suggestively and flirting outrageously with him. I was lost in a sexy , flirtatious world of erotic dancing.
He appreciated my efforts and “woot wooted” in all the right places, which of course made me work even harder to give him a Lap Dance to remember.
I Twirled and Swirled and Shimmied and Bounced around the room. I moved towards him, stroked my body then moved away from him – teasing him all the time.Finally I sat on his lap and rubbed my boobies in his face.
Giggling I even let him fondle my Butt cheeks & Bosoms.
He seemed to enjoy it very much and at the end, took my breath away in a searing kiss.
We both giggled having had a wonderful time.
Bearded_Man is a lovely man who enjoys bird watching, erotica & knows how to treat a lady with respect. He was a complete gentleman and very interesting to talk to.
If you see him around, be sure to say “Hello.”
Thank you for my date Bearded_man.BrandybeeParticipantHi boobookat,
Achat made some changes in regard to multiple accounts due to the many complaints concerning clones and alternative accounts used to attack, annoy and harass our members.
As you have now found, you have been denied your extra accounts automatically.
I also know, that a new account has to reach a level 10 before it can give likes and dislikes out, as again this facility was abused by members.
I suspect also, this is why suddenly there is an influx of old accounts suddenly appearing in the game with 0 or low levels.
If you wish to buy an extra account, I suggest you contact Support for advice.
Let us know if you get an answer.BrandybeeParticipantHi William,
Thank you for your idea.
Yes, it has been asked for before but it is a good idea and would be a useful facility.
We hope it will be realised in the future.In the meantime, some of us use the below PM facility with our Achat names. Sometimes you might have to add numbers as some names are taken already.
Example “Sophie” if taken, can be “Sophie017”
It is Free.
Chatango – http://chatango.com/signupdir
BrandybeeParticipantJust a REMINDER. 1 WEEK LEFT TO VOTEVote for a theme for Erotic Story Contest 13. Voting ends Fri 30 June 2017.Thank you all for your ideas. They are Fantastic. I have mixed and matched some so in all there is 10 for the Forum Village to vote on.
Please vote for your favourite.Here are the themes for you to vote on and be inspired for Erotic Story Contest 14.
Voting for the Theme ends Friday 30 June 2017 & The contest 14 will be open for submissions from Saturday 1 July 2017.1. Naughty Toys or Adapted Sex Toy
An erotic story that involves a sex toy or a thing adapted to give sexual pleasure. It could be a sexy device, a dildo, vibrator, a robot, a Symbian, handcuffs or blind folds. Tell us your naughty story.2. Mile High.
An erotic story at least a mile above ground or higher. A story that involves fun in an aeroplane, a hot air balloon, a rocket or a spaceship. Tell us your naughty sexy thoughts.3. Holiday
An erotic story which involves a break from the crud of your real life. Maybe a romantic break for 2 or more; a honeymoon couple ; a break a way when you meet and fall in lust or love. What happens in ____ stays in _____… Does this one whet your writing appetite?4. Caught… or not.
An erotic story where you nearly get caught or caught in the act. Maybe a hot encounter in a public space where the thrill of getting caught is there ; Maybe the couple get caught, by someone – a partner, police, someone in authority. The story could be the act of being caught or nearly caught, the consequences of being caught – a threesome, blackmail, humiliation… this could be your thrilling moment.5. Every picture tells a story.
Send me – the Contest Manager – a pic by PM over a seven day period. The story will be numbered and then a random number pulled out the hat. That numbered picture will be the subject of your erotic story.6. Good v Evil.
A Super hero story; an angel and devil story ; cops & robbers ; spies and terrorists. The story has to be erotic with good and evil adversaries.7. Prejudice
This is where you have rightly or wrongly judged a person for their colour; class ; politics ; religion etc… and it turns to lust or love. It could be your dirty little secret – someone you wouldn't be seen in public with but the sex is great, mind blowing and will make a hot story to tell.8. Fast and furious
Exactly what is says on the tin. An erotic story involving speed and a sexy encounter – in a car, on a train or maybe it’s the sex act where you just rip each other’s clothes off!9. Long distance lovers
This hot story could involve phone sex ; internet sex ; sexting or even a surprise visit.10. Food
An erotic food story. In your sexy play use : chocolate sauce, cucumbers, whipped cream, ice cream, ice cubes mmm.Please Vote. I look forward to seeing the eventual theme winner.
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