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Keiko, absolutely wonderful. Love the Scottish one. Congratulations on another stunning design for the shops soon, I hope
Cocking head on one side looking at you, twinkle in my eye ….. who said? lol
More lap dance favourites
The old favourite … You can leave your hat on – Joe Cocker
Rope burn – Janet Jackson
Nasty naught boy – Christina Aguilera
Naughty girl – Beyonce
Buttons – Pussy cat dolls
Lapdance – Nerd
Bad girl – Usher
Nasty Girl – Destinys Child
You're making me high – Toni Braxton
Breathe on me – Britney Spears
Sexual Healing – Marvin Gaye
Justify my love – MadonnaYay, well done Lover … Congratulations. Will you post a new riddle?
Thank you Tight, and Jeanona for the acknowlegement but really there is no need, blushing a little. By the very nature of my play, I meet like minded role players and therefore ….Ii think there is a great story just waiting to come out in most of the people I meet here .. some just needed a little push and the confidence to try… and then to post. There is still some, ……I will catch next time .. hehe
mmm.. I have read the stories now at least twice over and to be honest .. I am struggling in where to cast my vote… I like each one for different reasons so I am going to voice my initial thoughts of each story and why I like them . This is because voting alone, wont reflect, this and I dont want anyone to think, just because their story may or may not pick up votes, that their story is not enjoyed. God forbid, after such effort, they be disheartened to ever take part again. Ok, first, I need to point out, this is not a critique… I have no experience of such … in fact this is actually my first story too and my first story to ever be put out for people to read. They are just my feelings and views of my take on that particular story and why I like them and why casting my vote is sooooooo difficult
( PS, I have to make a viewpoint of my own story … so it wont give the game away to anonymity lol )THE TRAVEL – A man tempted to play away from home to add ” VAVA VOOM” back into his marriage. I get the feeling this author is not a native English speaker, so the hard work involved in translation should be applauded and recognised. I like the twist in who his “lover” is. It's hot, erotic and gives a ” feel good factor” . I like this story.
SECRET SUMMER TRYST – Established Achat lovers enjoying their regular annual liaison. A shorter hot read with an air of mystery to the charachters, very hot, very graphic and a complete turn on for the reader.
CLICK, CHERIE & PAULA STORY – A lady giving her man his surprise fantasy. Made me smile, very hot and every man's dream. I liked the surprise element of him not knowing. Well written and I like this story.
LA GRANDE TERRE – A youth camping story of losing his virginity in France. I liked the build up, the anticipation, the teasing the reader and finally the big event. A well written and lovely story.
SIREN'S SONG – I have to admit, this is one of my favourites. A story that had to be written. Regular Forum members / readers will know what I mean. Well written, funny, about a guy's infatuation with Robot Girl. I particularly liked the references to Achat, the ongoing topics and threads ( NSPD ) & the reference to EVA ( WALLE's robot friend in the film ). Very clever and well thought out.
BIKINI GIRL – A guy's regular holiday and his one off liaison with a UK girl .. mmm .. bit biased here, but got me wondering … Did I or Didnt I ? A great compliment whoever the girl is for the inspiration. It's well written, very hot, very graphic. I really liked this story too.
BIG SUR – An Achat story of 2 online lovers moving to Phase 5 – their first meet. A story from 2 sides. I liked this too, the build up and the hot graphic sex. Well written and executed. Think readers will identify with this story as most will wonder at some point in their game .. what if we arrange a meet.
FIREWOOD – A guy's liaison on route to his holiday destination. I liked this angle & it flowed nicely. Again I think the reader can identify with the fantasy of this story line. I liked the subtle humour, hot sex and the hint it could happen again.
SUMMER GAMES. – A mystery story of 2 long lost lovers. Again, I got the impression that the author is not a native English speaker & I applaud the work of the translation and additional work involved to post their story. It's a nice twist in the mystery & the feel good factor of 2 lovers reunited. I liked this a lot, really lovely and sensual.
MY STORY – A hot liaison between a transexual and a very hot window man. I liked the shyness & initial lack of confidence in the transgender charachter. Again, well written and very hot. I liked this, especially as not my usual orientation.
REVENGE – A naughty story of almost forced but consenual sex between a girl and 2 guys. A girl's hidden naughty fantasy I feel. This is hot and near the knuckle – which makes it an exciting read hehe . Very well written. My naughty side really enjoyed this, hehe , which I think is what the author wanted.
HIGH ON THE HILL – How clever is this??? A well written thought out poem. Humorous, entertaining and completely different from all the other entries. I really like this too , very ingenious.
So you see my problem, all great in their different ways … mmmm decisions, decisions …. Happy reading Folks
Another clue perhaps
mmm What every husband hopes for, or brags about, seeing in his wife after their eventful wedding night …..Taz .. what a great song … love that guys sexy groany voice mmmmmmmm
Ok, someone told me about a song … so good to make love too …
After dark … Tito and terantula … it soooooooo ticks all the boxes
Cool idea for the roaring 20s and gangsters mmm, I was thinking with the new releases of space and moon clothes and the planet backgrounds and the NSPD new space station… it would be good to stick with a theme such as this … Out of this world … Space Travellers… Time travel… would give a good range of choice to fire the imagination .. from Dr Who, to Star Wars to going back in time or even into the future … and therfore would include the roaring 20s too
PS .. I have started to read the stories .. OMG … the talent on here is amazing … Well done to all …
Tight, I bet you are over the moon with the amount of stories and high standard of them on here. Thank you again for your efforts and to the Achat Gods for supporting the contest. Happy reading everyone. xxx
Thank you, all of you, for your good wishes to our Queen and her nations. Its heartening to read all the positive feelings… The jubilee weekend is nearly upon us … Good Health to you all, Cheers ( raising my glass ), and I hope you & yours all enjoy it as much as we do whether its celebrating her 60 year reign, watching the events on TV , or just spending time with the people you love …
Big hugs … right, got a lot of flags to put up, food to prepare, munchies to get, punch to make and beer and ale to buy… hic cup .. oops .. starting a bit early hehe … well… we are having a hot spell here for a change
GOD SAVE THE QUEEN.
Ok, Chas … I've pondered and pondered and not got a clue, can you give us a clue or the answer to put me out of my misery
TY xxUrban … MWAHHHHH
Arhh Tight's just jealous JD …. Welcome to the England camp … you are most welcome here … we wave our flags, drink our ale and sing loud songs … not to mention eating loads of munchies as out team plays. You have to learn to jump up and down and shout the below phrases too
” FOWL “
” OY REF ARE YOU BLIND?”
” NO WAY WAS THAT A GOAL, HE WAS OFF SIDE “
” GOAL” ” YAYYYYYYYYYY “
” RED CARD – SEND HIM OFF “
” HAND BALL”
” PENALTY”
Pafe, good to see you are joining in the fun too and you have an alliegence to Poland. Good luck in all your matches … except when you play England
We need more to join in .. come on folks