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well, you can allways say “put it out, i wanna taste your cum”
well, bear…..as i said i'm working on a story who involve two elves (see title in one of my preview post). at the moment, i'm creating a first part to introduce them and there is no erotic moment, just some drammatic one, but in the future, i'll gonna add it. and yes, thinking of it i can add it to this tale……..but first i have to elaborate it a little! mmmmh, my mind is at work……and this can be reeeeeally a good thing!
anyway, i'll jump in only when i have the first chapter ready, cause i have a damn nice idea now!
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to give you a little idea on how the two sister will be, i add you here the old pic of them i had drawn some years ago.
honestly, is one of the jobs i like more, so I'm more than happy to see them in actionEdit:
Well, first chapter is now ready…….i have to read it again and then start to think on how i wanna use it: like a stand alone or linked it whit this tale.First big difference whit your works is i write it in third person. but i don't think it's a big problem, not at all.
btw, i'm still thinking about how to jump in whit one of this two char (probably the one whit the spear axe), but to do it, i think i have to add a second chapter. hope i can do it in the week end, so next week ican add it in the forum.btw, bear was curious about the char…well, here there is an anticipation:
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Phylia and Aily had grown in the ancient forest of Everious, a peaceful place for hundreds of years, where the elves have always lived in close contact with nature, protecting it from whoever has tried to destroy it. The giant tree of the forest has always give them a warm and comfortable place to live, providing them food and everything the elves needs. To show their gratitude, the elves had protect the ancient forest for generation, preventing anyone to cut trees indiscriminately, specially the humans, who use the wood to build their cities, ships and weapon for their war.As a child, despite her slight figure, Phylia has been shown to have significant force, which she has always put it at the service of her village and once she become an adult, she was given command of the Green Warden, the defender of the forest. Many elves wanted the honor of being chosen by her as companions for life, be able to caress her strong and vigorous body, but at the same time able to express an innate grace and femininity, but Phylia has always refused their avances …….. the only thing that was really important for her was to protect her village and her little sister.
Aily, unlike her sister, has always been a shy and timid girl, but if necessary has always demonstrated excellent control over the elements, specially the one of fire, a very rare thing for elves born in the Everious forest. Her long silver hair caressed by the wind and her white skin, had dreaming all the elves of the village but no one has ever managed to win her heart, her soft and sensual lips…..
……”Blue's House sounds good! when are you going to open it!?
I have my fault in most of the recent off topic, i admit it, cause Rukya, blue and NG had involved me so much whit their little game, ihih…..and i agree whit Adera about the treads made by susy_a and tom.
oh, before i forget….NG, thanks for your sweety word!
topless in mountains
guess the gal had a little perky look then hehe speshully early in thne morning!
Are you drunk or just wake up!? ih ih!
my bad Rukya……i don't mean it was your fault. what i really mean is you was talking about some messages most of us know, when you was said this
take care boys the last time someone talk if this game , all posts was erased
, i know it was mines