AAAAWWW !! I wanted to see her rage…but not with Horgus dying. Poor her! Snif!
Very nice ship battle and emotions you describe there. Loved it!!!
And about these maps, nicely detailed and gives good idea of the places. Maybe you could add some points and legends pointing at the places where some important events happen during the story?
Like “x : here arrived the ship wreck, “x” here was the ship attacked, “x” here was Horgus burried, “x” here is where she lost her mother and hid,… just the important events appearing as the story goes on.